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Post by *~J~* on May 1, 2004 20:37:07 GMT 6
Episode 14:
Zhan Sai was very weak. Luck was finally on Zhan Sai¡¯s side. Somehow, Hung Shi Jiong caught a cold and was experiencing a high fever. A throbbing headache, prevented Hung Shi Jiong from getting up from his bed. Seizing the opportunity, Hung Tai Tai quickly ordered the army to give Zhan Sai some food and get a doctor to treat Zhan Sai. Hung Tai Tai did not dare to release Zhan Sai but decided wait a little while longer before she does anything drastic. Zhan Sai was feeling better but he kept thinking about Yin Chow and Wai Wai. Yin Chow was also thinking about Zhan Sai but she knew she had to be strong and could not be defeated. She had to be there when Zhan Sai returns. Later in the night, Hung Shi Jiong was feeling better and he thought of Zhan Sai, his unfinished business. He wanted to kill Zhan Sai right away. He walked into his study and took his favorite pistol from the drawer of his writing table. Hung Tai Tai saw him taking the gun and said, ¡°What are you doing? Where are you going? You are still sick. You must rest.¡± Hung Shi Jiong laughs and said, ¡°Haha! I can finally get my revenge today! I will kill Zhan Sai! I can¡¯t stand to keep him alive any longer!¡± Hung Shi Jiong walked towards the door but Hung Tai Tai blocked him. Hung Shi Jiong pushed her away and said, ¡°Get out of my way!¡± Hung Tai Tai tried to prevent him from leaving the room. Furious, he fired a shot at Hung Tai Tai and the bullet pierced through her thorax. Hung Tai Tai knew that he will kill Zhan Sai if she doesn¡¯t stop him. Ignoring the pain, she grabbed the gun that was hanging on the wall and fires at Hung Shi Jiong when he was walking down the stairs. Hung Shi Jiong dropped dead immediately as the bullet went right through his brain. Hung Tai Tai ordered Hung Shi Jiong¡¯s assistant to release Zhan Sai. Hong Tai Tai collapsed to the floor as she was bleeding profusely. Hung Tai Tai was rushed to the hospital. Kam Tai Tai heard the news and rushed to the hospital. She told Yin Chow to stay at home and wait for Zhan Sai. Yin Chow agreed. She prayed that both Hung Tai Tai and Zhan Sai would be fine. Wai Wai walked to his mother and said, ¡°Ah Ma, what is wrong?¡± Yin Chow looks at her son and said, ¡°Go and finish your homework. Ah Die is coming home soon.¡± Wai Wai who thought his father was busy with work skipped happily to his room. When Kam Tai Tai reached the hospital, Hung Tai Tai was being pushed to the Intensive Care Unit. Kam Tai Tai asked about her condition immediately. The doctors said, ¡°I am sorry, we¡¯ve tried our best. She¡¯s still alive but I think it wouldn¡¯t be long before she leaves.¡± Kam Tai Tai rushed into the room. Hung Tai Tai, ¡°I am sorry Kam Tai Tai.¡± Kam Tai Tai said, ¡°No, we should be sorry.¡± Hung Tai Tai whined in pain and said, ¡°Hung Shi Jiong shot me first. I knew he has gone mad. I needed to kill him. I had lived in agony all these years. He could not accept Lai Zhu¡¯s death. He kicked and punched me everyday. I am also going mad. Now, I feel peaceful as I have ended it all. Don¡¯t feel bad for me, it is better this way.¡± After saying this, Hung Tai Tai breathed her last breath. Kam Tai Tai takes Hung Tai Tai¡¯s hands and cries, ¡°May you rest in peace.¡±
Meanwhile, back home, Yin Chow¡¯s mother and Ting Ma were preparing some noodles and vegetables for Zhan Sai to eat when he comes home. Yin Chow who was eager to see Zhan Sai rushed to the junction to wait for Zhan Sai. Soon a car appeared. Zhan Sai was in it! He was escorted by a few soldiers. Zhan Sai hugged and kissed her. He bent down and touched their baby Zhan Sai looked at Yin Chow and said, ¡°Yin Chow, you didn¡¯t sleep well.¡± Yin Chow said, ¡°I am fine ¡± She looks at Zhan Sai and says, ¡°Zhan Sai! I really missed you.¡± She heads for his shoulders and cries. ¡°I am back. Nothing will separate us again,¡± said Zhan Sai as he held Yin Chow¡¯s hands and walked home.
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Post by *~J~* on May 1, 2004 20:38:20 GMT 6
Last Episode, For now:
Four months later, Zhan Sai successfully started his very own company. He is now the managing director of the company. Wai Wai is also doing very well in school. He gets full marks for his tests and has won many prizes in various competitions. Everyone attended the opening ceremony of Zhan Sai¡¯s company, including Yin Chow. Zhan Sai wanted Yin Chow to stay at home as her delivery date is near and should rest more but Yin Chow wouldn¡¯t miss Zhan Sai¡¯s big day for anything. The crowd clapped and whistled as Zhan Sai and Yin Chow cut the ribbon to the new office. Everyone congratulated Zhan Sai and Yin Chow. They praised Kam Tai Tai for having such a talented and good son. They were confident that Zhan Sai would be able to rebuild the Kam family. When Zhan Sai and Yin Chow were about to pop the champagne, Yin Chow suddenly had cramps. She is going to deliver the baby soon! Zhan Sai felt excited and worried. Carefully, he carried Yin Chow to the car. Yin Chow¡¯s mother, Wai Wai, Kam Tai Tai followed. They accompanied Yin Chow at the backseat. Zhan Sai rushed towards the hospital. Yin Chow was pushed into the operating room. The others waited outside the delivery room anxiously. Wai Wai asked his father what was going on. He was afraid that something bad would happen to his mother. Zhan Sai told him not to worry and to expect a little baby to play with soon. Upon hearing this, Wai Wai was very happy as he was waiting for this day for the past few months.
A few hours has passed but there was no sign of Yin Chow successfully delivering the baby. A nurse walked towards Zhan Sai and said that Yin Chow needs Zhan Sai. Yin Chow was having difficulties in giving birth. The baby was in the wrong position. Zhan Sai entered the room and sees Yin Chow in great pain. His heart broke into a million pieces. He rushed towards Yin Chow. He kissed Yin Chow and held her hand tightly. He gave her lots of words of encouragement. Yin Chow was surprised to see Zhan Sai. Zhan Sai said, ¡°Yin Chow! I¡¯m here. Don¡¯t worry! Everything will be alright.¡± The doctor said, ¡°Kam Tai, push! Push! The baby has shifted its position. The baby almost out.¡± Yin Chow pushed and they heard the baby cry. It is a girl. Zhan Sai was thrilled and said that they have a dragon and a phoenix child (a boy and a girl). Yin Chow smiled and she fell asleep.
A month later, Zhan Sai organized a full-moon ceremony for his daughter. Zhan Sai and Yin Chow named her Kam Shu Qing. (Shu as in comfortable and Qing as in bright sunny day). Zhan Sai managed to rebuild the Kam Family. He managed to buy back their old house. He also reunited with his third brother, fifth, sixth and eighth sister. As his sisters have all graduated from university, they were able to help out in Zhan Sai¡¯s company. Zhan Sai¡¯s third brother also helped Zhan Sai by managing one of Zhan Sai¡¯s factories. Zhan Sai held his daughter in his arms and said, ¡°She¡¯s as pretty as you, Yin Chow.¡± Yin Chow smiles and hugs Zhan Sai.
~The End For Now~
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Post by *~J~* on May 1, 2004 20:41:40 GMT 6
What do you think about it? I wrote it in three days! Phew! I just couldn't stop till i finished it! In my next holidays, i want to write about A Awakening Story 2! ahahaha! I can't wait for AMOC2 's ending! Soly! I support you!
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Post by wendysys on May 3, 2004 5:05:12 GMT 6
Well done!
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Post by SOLY on May 3, 2004 15:33:34 GMT 6
Yes, well done. I love it. Ok, I hope to finish my AMOC2 soon. But u know I have to finish my Math's assignment, Computer, n English first. Stupid Math's assignment make me very tired.
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Post by *~J~* on May 6, 2004 20:27:56 GMT 6
Glad you've liked it.......... which specific part do you like? Hehehe........... i just can't wait to find out the ending of AMOC2
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Post by SOLY on May 7, 2004 12:37:50 GMT 6
I like when Yin Chow went to check on Zhan Sai at night, and, he, he, lol...
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Post by *~J~* on May 7, 2004 17:37:31 GMT 6
Hehe.... Soly......... anyway, i'm going to read your AMOC2 now......... Will give feedback!
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Post by Wilairat on May 26, 2004 11:21:12 GMT 6
Jamie,sorry for late reply he,he but I like your story a lot,you know I read it just about not more than 30 minutes ha..... And now I'm doing the same as AMOC 2.That's I'm choosing photos to be the cover of this story line wow....do you have some photos that want to recomment to me ;D (coz I printed out your story and want to take it into a book) And hope you'll write more coz you said "end for now" so that I'm waiting to read the continuing lol he,he
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Post by *~J~* on May 26, 2004 13:48:39 GMT 6
Thank you Wilairat! Have you received my mail? Anyway, I will try to write more when I am free Maybe you can use these pictures? I think both are nice but the second one is small..... I wonder if the net have a bigger version?
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Post by *~J~* on Oct 29, 2006 17:30:02 GMT 6
i've corrected my grammatical errors. haha. there were tons of it! didn't proof-read it when i first wrote it haha.
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Post by SOLY on Oct 29, 2006 17:48:59 GMT 6
Haha, I didn't even notice. Actually my English is not good enough, hehe.
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Post by *~J~* on Oct 31, 2006 13:11:49 GMT 6
okay, i just noticed that i missed a lot of grammatical error.... pls bear with me... alot of editing to do! haha.
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