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Post by SOLY on Feb 2, 2004 9:10:10 GMT 6
[/color] By foufou Soly Firstly, please don’t laugh at my story . My English is not good , so hope u can understand. It may be not original and logic; coz the story is a bit deformed ;D. It’s not really followed from the end of ATE2 , he, he. Suppose that the story was finished and Mei Na and Tin got together since 2000, not in 2010. And this story is supposed to be in 2020. Tin Ning and Ma Chi Keung are supposed to have only 2 children, not 4, he, he. The cast may be not suitable to the personage, but I’d to keep those, lol. Of course I finished the story but I won’t leave the whole story here, he, he, let u judge the cast and the first episode first, he, he. 20 years later CastLiza Wang Ming Chuen as Helen Fok Adam Cheng Siu Chow as Yip Wing Tim Louis Koo Tin Lok as Ma Chi Lok: Ma Chi Keung and Teen Ning’s son Flora Chan Wei Chan as Cate: Helen Fok and Berry’s daughter Sunny Chan Kam Hung as Yip Noyan: Yip Wing Tin’s adoptive son Ada Choi Siu Fun as Ma Chi Ying: Ma Chi Keung and Teen Ning’s daughter Grace Yip Pui Man as Koh Mei Chin: Wing Tin and Mei Na’s daughter Lawrence Ng as Cheng Ka Man Yu Li as Lui Yee/Madame Danny Lee as Berry Nicky Wu as Nicky Cheng: Cheng Ho Lei’s son Jade Leung as Jade Cheng: Ada’s friend Michael Tong Man Lung as Michael Yip Yong Sheramaine Sheh as Yip Ming: Yip Wing Tin’adoptive daughter Kwok Fung as Cheng Ho Lei Chan Mei Kei as Koh Mei Na
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Post by SOLY on Feb 2, 2004 9:16:47 GMT 6
Characters’ presentation:
Helen Fok played by Liza Wang: lawyer and widowed, divorces Berry and comes back to Hong Kong with her daughter, Cate, for joining her mother (Lisa Fong) and her stepfather (Chung).
Yip Wing Tin played by Adam Cheng: businessman and widowed. He has 3 adoptive children, Noyan, Yong and Ming.
Ma Chi Lok played by Louis Koo: policeman and lives with his mother, (Teen Ning) and his sister, (Ma Chi Jing). He dislikes Yip Wing Tin because he thinks that Tin is the cause of his dad’s death. He refuses all Wing Tin’s good carefulness. But step by step, he discovers that Wing Tin really has the good on him and his family. So he accepts him and calls him uncle.
Cate played by Flora Chan: reporter, funny, and daughter of Helen and Berry.
Yip Noyan played by Sunny Chan: Ah Biu and Ivy’s son, adopted by Yip Wing Tin since the death of his parents (at the end of ATE1). He is cute and obedient son.
Ma Chi Ying played by Ada Choi. She is Louis’s sister, Tin Ning and Keung’s daughter.
Koh Mei Chin incarnated by Grace Yip: Mei Na and Tin’s daughter, lives with her mother and never seen her father
story Koh Mei Na left Tim, shortly after their marriage because she could not forget that Tim killed her father. Ma Chi Keung is death by a boat’s explosion 15 years ago. Tim used to accuse himself that he was the cause of this even. Tim had ordered his brother, Wing Jak to warn a mafia who had bothered them and Jak made the ship of this one explode. By misfortune, Keung was in there too. He was reconciling with that one. So he was very unfortunate, sad and wanted to make up for Keung’s family but they refused and did not want any thing from him.
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Post by SOLY on Feb 2, 2004 9:19:18 GMT 6
Chapter 1
Tim (Adam Cheng) is in his bureau. He is reminding the past when his best friend (Keung) was killed by ship’s explosion. Suddenly, he is disarranged by a noise at the door. Noyan (Sunny) enters and says that he is waited for a reunion. Adam replies that he doesn’t feel good. So he wants to go home and lets Sunny attain the reunion on his behalf. At home, Adam is surprised to see Yip Ming (Sheramaine) who is just coming back from France (he, he). She studied management. Then Michael (Michael Tong) and Sunny come and the whole family have a dinner together, and then they are interrupted by the TV news. A building that’s built by Tim’s company (Timyip) has a problem (he, he). It’s not built correctly as in the rule. The following day, Chi Lok (Louis) comes to find Tim at his office. The police want him to make clear to this problem. Tim says that he doesn’t know, he always respects the rule, but all evidences make him in the bad situation. Tim doesn’t know Louis but Louis knows him well. He hates him because of his father’s death but he never has an attention to take revenge. Coming back from police station, several journalists wait for Tim, among them; there is Cate (Flora) too. Cate falls in front of Tin, Tim notices that she looks like Helen Fok and tell Sunny to make her enter. Flora was happy but when she sees Tim in bureau, Tim asks her about her name and her family. So he know that Flora is Helen (Liza)’s daughter (he, he). Flora asks him about the even. He says that his company is a wide company; he doesn’t need to do that, because it would destroy the image of the company... It may have a misunderstanding. Tim wonders why Helen doesn’t come to see him. After Flora leaves the room, Tin calls Noyan and Michael, and talk about the even. Michael says that it’s a fault of someone (xx), who can’t be found. (Ha, ha) In fact, it’s the disloyal act of Michael, he paid that one (lol, but no one knows) Helen (Liza) comes to Ting Ning’s house and notice that Louis and Chi Ying (Ada Choi) have grown up. Louis talks about Tim’s affaire. Helen is worried, Ting Ning notices that. Helen still cares on Tim. Back to the house, Liza is not in her. Flora asks her what happen. She doesn’t say anything and she sees Flora’s paper. Flora is writing Tim’s affaire. Morrow, Adam comes to lawyer’s office for his lawsuit, and sees Liza. He doesn’t see her long time ago. She is completely changed. Liza used to see him in newspaper or on TV. It is not a surprise for her. He wants Liza to be his lawyer for resolving his problem. Both have a conversation in a palace’s restaurant: Adam: “How is berry?”<br>Liza: “We got divorced 3 years ago, before I came back to HK.”<br>Adam: “Sorry. Is it not causing of the same problem as before?”<br>Liza: “He is so good for me, (Changing reaction) so, any news about Mei Na?”<br>Adam: “Your mother might tell you about that. 20 years ago, she left me without saying a word. She just left a message for me. She can’t live with the one who’s supposed to kill her father. And she thought that I married her for just compensating her shortage. She is wrong, I really loved her. You may think that god punish me. No wife, no children, no friends!”<br>Liza: trying to comfort him, “I know. I hope Mei Na can understand it 1 day, and comes back. I know that you are also worried about Keung’s death. I see, it’s not your will. Ting Ning understands that also but she can’t forget that it was causing of you.”<br>Liza asks him about the building problem. He says he didn’t do that. Liza believes him, and she says that she will try her best for helping him. Tim brings her to home. Flora asks her who that man is. The answer is a client. Of course, Flora didn’t see who is in the car, she would know if she saw. Tin and Liza go to courthouse. Journalists are exciting on Tin but they are forbidden by police. Flora sees her mother and wants to go on but is pushed by the police (Louis) and fall. Liza sees it but doesn’t go to see her and enters in the building. Back home, Flora is caring her injured. Liza argues her why she chooses this job? It is too dangerous. Then she helps her to care it with a bad mood. Flora asks her mother for the tribunal. Liza says that journalists are too annoying, if she wants to be good journalist she should to find herself the new and she enters in her room. 2 minute later, a cleaner comes to Flora and give her a dossier. Flora is happy and cries “thanks mom”. Liza smile in her room (umm not good). Flora is complimented by her boss for her work and she invites her colleagues for the dinner. However her parent and grandmother are riches, Flora has a simple life. She likes the adventure. She likes her father. She doesn’t want someone takes his place. Flora and her friend (Meijing) go to the restaurant; she sees Louis there and tall her about her injured. Meijing hate him too. Going out, they recognize Louis’s car. Meijing is bursting his car’s wheels, Flora wants to stop her, and then Louis arrives. They try to escape but Louis catches Flora and brings her to the police station. Liza comes to assure Flora. Louis recognize Liza. So he removes his complaint.
«Do re mi fa sol la si do … Creuse les pneus, tape les mecs… » = music of the end of the chapter sung by Ah Je, Ha, ha, ha.
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Post by mun on Feb 2, 2004 10:05:26 GMT 6
Well done, Soly! ;D The storyline is quite interesting but I am having a hard time remembering all the new characters, haha!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 2, 2004 13:23:41 GMT 6
Well done, Soly! ;D The storyline is quite interesting but I am having a hard time remembering all the new characters, haha! Thank u. Do u want to read next episodes?
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 2, 2004 15:59:35 GMT 6
wow...sounds good so far Soly!keep it comin!!
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Post by *~J~* on Feb 2, 2004 17:48:20 GMT 6
Keep up the good work! ;D
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 2, 2004 21:12:02 GMT 6
oh yeah 4got 2 say...how come u didnt use the characters name but instead u used like the names of those who were starring in this??
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Post by SOLY on Feb 3, 2004 8:51:10 GMT 6
oh yeah 4got 2 say...how come u didnt use the characters name but instead u used like the names of those who were starring in this?? It's most easy to see who r? lol New poster, lol ;D
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 3, 2004 16:59:43 GMT 6
i like the new poster u made!both posters r great!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 4, 2004 12:40:57 GMT 6
i like the new poster u made!both posters r great! Thank u
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Post by SOLY on Feb 4, 2004 12:44:41 GMT 6
Chapter 2
Liza invites Louis for the dinner. Flora is around too. Liza excuses Louis for Flora. Also, Louis excuses Flora for having hurt her last time. Liza talks him about her and his parents when they were young. At the time, Tim comes; Louis looks at him with distrust . Liza introduces Louis to Tin “Ma Chi Lok”. Tin, surprised , looks at Louis with dearness . Then, Louis says, “excuse me; I have to go, goodnight aunty.” Tin wants to stop him but he is already far. Flora follows him. Louis doesn’t want her to follow him. Flora wants to know the problem between Louis and Tin. She is curious. Suddenly, Louis sees his girlfriend, Mei Chin (Grace) with a rich man’s son (Nicky). He wants to approach her, but they go up in the car. Flora asks him if she is his girlfriend and Louis doesn’t anything and goes. Flora does the sign on her face, for showing her discontent. Liza and Tin are talking about Keung in the restaurant. Tin is worried about Keung’s fmily (Louis, Tin Ning…). He accuses himself, that what he did is unforgivable. Keung was death because of him. He doesn’t know what he can do for making up for his family. Now, he has a problem… Liza comforts him and says “don’t worry! You better to prepare for the tomorrow lawsuit.” Tin looks at her and says “thank you”. Liza smile, “it’s my job”. Louis waits for Grace under her apartment and asks her about the last day, when he saw her and Nicky. She doesn’t answer, she wants to leave him. Louis is heart broken. Grace works as a cashier in a restaurant. She lives alone in HK and her mother Mei Na is in Taiwan. Morrow, in law court, all bad things go to the Mr xx (the one who can’t be found), but Tin still has to be responsible for his company. He has to repay all the ones who bought the building. And he has to rebuild the image of the company. His children smile to him. Louis was around also. Tin thanks Liza . Getting out, Flora is among the journalist. She is pushed by the others and falls. Sunny helps her to straighten. She thanks him. Liza approaches her, looks at her, sighs “don’t force too much,” and goes. Sunny walks after Liza and his godfather and tell Liza, “Your daughter is adorable!” Liza smile. Louis comes to Flora while ridiculing her, “Are you ok? You look so funny, this day” Flora replies “you should be Disappointed, to see me being alright, right? And how is your girlfriend” He goes. Flora follows him but closes the door of his car at her nose. Flora, very furious , goes home and see her father, grandmother and step grandfather. She is very happy. Liza has a dinner with Tin. They talk about children and the past. Then they go to see the stars. Tin says, “Before, I only cared on my work. If I cared more on the others’ feeling, I wouldn’t lose you and Mei Na.” Liza says that she supports him to find Mei Na. Tin: “I don’t have hope for Mei Na. Maybe, she gets married again. He just hopes that she has a better life. Then they talk about the stars, and both look happy. Flora is in her father’s house. They are talking about Liza. So Flora learns that Tin was Liza’s ex-boyfriend. Liza (happy) comes back home and surprise to see her mother (Lisa Fong). Both have a conversation and Liza learn that Berry is in HK too.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 4, 2004 17:50:37 GMT 6
thank u Soly 4 chapter 2!!its great!keep up the good work but dont 4get about uni work!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 5, 2004 14:27:10 GMT 6
thank u Soly 4 chapter 2!!its great!keep up the good work but dont 4get about uni work! u r welcome. Of course I won't forget univ. He, he Now I am writing AMOC2 too
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Post by SOLY on Feb 6, 2004 14:15:41 GMT 6
Episode 3
Tin visits Teng Ning’s house and is chased by Teng Ning and Louis. Liza arrives and brings him to a tea house. They meet Flora and Berry. Berry is delighted to meet Liza and Tim. When Tin is talking with Berry, Flora asks Liza why she is with Tin, he is a bad man, and she shouldn’t work for him. Helen wonders why Cate said that. Flora knew the cause of Keung’s death by her grandma, believing Louis’s reaction; she thinks that Tim had killed his best friend. Helen explains that it was not his volunteer but Flora doesn’t mind it. Tin starts to date Helen again. Grace is abandoned by Nicky and goes to see her mother (Mei Na) in Taiwan. She has a cancer intestinal and cardiac arrest. Grace is worried. She will lose her sole relative. So, Mei Na tells that she is not alone, she has a father. He is Yip Weng Tim and gives her their photo. Grace wonders why her mother didn’t say it rather. She has a wealthy father, why she is in this situation? Why he didn’t care on them? So Grace decides to bring her to HK for taking care of her. It is Sheramaine’s birthday; Tin invites Helen and her family (daughter (Cate), mother (Ping), step father and Berry) for the ceremony. Noyan and Cate have a good conversation. Although, Cate doesn’t like Tin, she is delights to befriend Noyan. Ping notice that Helen and Tin’s relation is not just like a friend. So she ask Helen and she doesn’t want that Cate and Berry know that her and Tin get together again. Michael comes with his girlfriend Jade and introduces her to his godfather. At the time, there is a girl want to see Tin. It is Grace. She says that she is his daughter. Tin amazed and Helen shocked. Cate recognizes her as Louis’ girlfriend but she doesn’t know more about her. Michael takes her as a cheater. She accuses Tin to not be responsible for his family, her mother will died and Tin is happy here. Tin amazed, nears her and asks her what her mother’s name is. “Koh Mei Na” and shows him the photo. Helen always shocked, approaches her and says that she wants to see Mei Na. But she doesn’t want nobody else bothers her. She accepts Tin only to see her mother. Tin goes with her and Liza and her relatives go back home. (Stupid situation ha?) Tim is very touched to see Mei Na. She is surprise to see him also. Tin takes her hand and asks her about Grace. Why she didn’t tell him rather about it. They are so hard, why they didn’t ask him for helping. Tin says that now the medicine is advanced. So he will pay the good doctors for her. Mei Na says that she is happy to see Tin. Tin weeps. Helen waits for Tin’s call. Ping and Berry come reinforce her. Ping goes find a tea for her. And Berry asks if she love Tim again. Helen confesses that they started to date each other 1 month ago but now she cares more about Mei Na’s health. Berry is hopeless. Morrow, Liza, Teng Ning, Ada visits Mei Na. Tin, Noyan and Grace are there too. While seeing Liza, Tin leaves Mei Na’s hand. Mei Na and Teng Ning notice it. Liza and Teen Ning ask her about her health and her life before. Tin and Noyan get out, somebody calls Ada. She has to go. She meets Tin and Noyan outside. Tin tells Noyan to bring her and for him, he stays there. Noyan wonders her why her behavior toward his family is different from the ones of her brother and mother. She answers that she doesn’t mind about the old generation. Ada had admired Sunny long time ago. As a son of a wealthy man, he never has badly new and has a good behavior toward people. In hospital, the nurse signals the visitors that the patient needs to take the rest. Teen Ning wants to stay with Mei Na and she is accepted. Liza and Grace go out. Liza wants to bring Grace to home but she prefers go by herself. Tin waits for Liza in the hall and they go up in the car together. Tin drives Helen’s car. Grace sees it.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 7, 2004 17:44:24 GMT 6
ohhh i want more!!hehe...interestin story so far!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 8, 2004 13:56:54 GMT 6
ohhh i want more!!hehe...interestin story so far! ok, u know I finished the story already, but, I need to correct something. As I changed the first epis.. a bit, so I need to change all.
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Post by wendysys on Feb 17, 2004 12:06:35 GMT 6
Hard for me to see Liza as Helen Fok.
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Post by SOLY on Feb 17, 2004 16:17:11 GMT 6
he, he, I can't imagine her as a lawyer neither. But, he, he. Can't do otherwise ;D
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Post by wendysys on Feb 18, 2004 23:57:00 GMT 6
he, he, I can't imagine her as a lawyer neither. But, he, he. Can't do otherwise ;D Soly, why can't you imagine her as a lawyer? Well, I can. Liza would have no problem playing a lawyer. It's just that Helen Fok is such a DUMB character in ATE I & II, so I wouldn't want Liza to play her.
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