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Jan 17, 2005 16:59:32 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Jan 17, 2005 16:59:32 GMT 6
hehe, glad that you like it. Ok I will continue later. No know my English is poor. Glad that u can understand
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Jan 17, 2005 17:08:35 GMT 6
Post by *~J~* on Jan 17, 2005 17:08:35 GMT 6
cool story line. beautifully put together!
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Post by SOLY on Jan 19, 2005 9:45:14 GMT 6
Episode 12
Morrow morning, Liza and Helen woke up, and surprise to see the breakfast ready. David arrived with some omelets. David: “I don’t know what to cook, I can’t do only the omelet, but sorry I can’t keep the egg yolk raw.” Liza: “That’s good like that, fortunately it’s backed, we can protect the bird flue if there’s.” Helen and David smiled. Liza looked around the table. David: “what are you looking for?” Helen to Liza: “ok, I will find it for you.” Helen went to the kitchen and came back with the small tin can of salt and pepper. David was sorry… Liza asked him if he had to go to work. He said no, he had a day off. Liza asked him if she could be free to go shopping with her. David approved and smiled. Helen looks at her father and smiled also. Liza was at the steering wheel. David said that it’s strange to see Liza driving. Liza to David: “you better take your permit again…” In the clothes store, Liza looked at the clothes for men. David wondered whom she wanted to buy for. Then she asked him if he liked that shirt … David was constrained. Liza said that she had a party that night, and she thought that David won’t refuse to go with her. David: “of course not. I would accept with my pleasure.” He smiled and continued: “but please let me pay it by myself.” Liza refused and David was the one who paid it. Leaving the house, David opened the door of the car for Liza in the left side. Liza wondered… David didn’t want Liza to drive with her nice dress. David: “please! Let me do a service for you.” Liza: “how long haven’t you drove?” David: “Don’t worry, although, I didn’t drive for long time, but I have the permit. I will try my best. Please let me be charming for once!” Liza agreed but told him to drive slowly. In the party, Liza presented David to the minister… Of course they know him, but this time they appreciated David’s behavior a lot. They didn’t use to see him as nice and as agreeable. Chi Lik was there also. He looked at Liza wildly. David couldn’t bear to see Lik looking at her like this. But Liza told him to be quiet and greet him normally.
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Jan 19, 2005 15:02:49 GMT 6
Post by *~J~* on Jan 19, 2005 15:02:49 GMT 6
i wish that Lik would die in the end, or perhaps something bad would happen to him. i dun like him....... and by the way, where's Kals? I thought her exams are over? ??
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Post by SOLY on Jan 21, 2005 9:41:37 GMT 6
I dun no how I will end the story, hehe Episode 13 The music resonated, David invited Liza to dance. Liza accepted. Lik looked at them dancing. His uncle talked to him: “(talking about David) he seems to remember back…” They started to be careful with him…<br>After the party, Liza wanted to go to see stars… Seeing the stars, Liza inhaled the air and smiled. David took off his jacket, and put on Liza. Liza looked at him and said: “Thanks you, (looking at the sky) It seems that I am too busy. This landscape is so far not found in my memory.” David: “If you like, I can bring you to see it often.” He, scared, tried to place his hand on her shoulder. Liza turned to him and laid her head on his shoulder. David was surprise, and happy that she didn’t mind. He smiled and both looked at the sky. Morning, Helen, holding a milk glass, met Liza who was preparing the breakfast with her domestic. Helen: “Hi mom.” Liza: “Hi honey.” Helen (looking at her mother): “Umm, you look charming today.” Liza, touching her face: “really? ... Thank you.” And she smiled at her. Helen offered her help and both headed for the table. Helen (smelt the food): “Umm, it looks nice. Wonder if daddy is awakened. He will like it.” Then David appeared from the room. Helen: “there daddy! Hi dad...” David: “Hi honey.” And he smiled to Liza. Helen: “smell it. It’s mom who made it.” David: “umm, it looks nice. Can I taste it?” Liza: “Umm, you try it later! (To Helen) put it on the table.” Helen: “ok.” Going forward about 2 steps she stopped: “op.” And she went back to interrupt her father. She looked at David then Liza, several time and said: “hey dad! If my eyes don’t have the problem, you were getting out from mom’s bedroom?” David, getting shy: “Really?” Liza, getting shy also: “ok, I have to prepare myself to go to work.” David: “me too.” Helen stopped his father and insisted him to tell her… David fingered the food and asked her if she didn’t need to put it on the table. Helen: “oh, right.” But she dragged her father with her to the table and told him to sit down. Helen: “Umm, it seems that you don’t need my help much. Tell me what did you do?! I hope you didn’t force her to drink wine.” David: “Don’t think that I am as bad.” Liza arrived and said: “Tell me Helen! You don’t need to go to work?” Helen, watching her watch: “oh right. I have to go. (To David) I will ask you more.” Then she left the house. Liza and David, looking at her leaving, looked at each other and smiled.
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Jan 22, 2005 13:54:39 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Jan 22, 2005 13:54:39 GMT 6
[glow=red,2,300] Episode 14[/glow] David arrived at Li Tin Century’s company happily. He bought breakfast for everybody. Everyone wondered why he was happy like that. Then Tin arrived and told him to follow him to an office. Tin: “this is your new office. Now it’s empty you can decorate what you want.” David: “I think I don’t need as big surface.” Tin walked around the table and said: “Before, you forget who you were. You might not mind the post that we give you. But now it’s different. You know who you are. This post may be an insult for you. You may not please to be my subordinate. At least, you are Helen’s father and Auntie’s ex-husband; it’s not good from me to give you that post.” David: “haha, with what I did to you, I can’t expect to be able to stand here. I was too mean to you, but you still help me, it is very kind from you. Thank you.” Tin, sitting: “haha. I can’t believe that I can hear this word (thanks you) from Fok Chi Leung’s mouth.” David: “I just realize that wealth and reputation are not important for me. Now I will try my best to maintain this family relationship.” Tin: “congratulation.” David: “But I still have an ambition. I didn't want to be weaker than Liza. I want to be the one who provide for the family.” Tin: “You can sure. Don’t you want to create Fok’s company again?” David: “I don’t think. Now I feel well here. I will try my best to help you to realize your plan of no-smoke city.” Tin thanks him. David helped Tin to gain a lot of money in the stock exchange. Tin gave him then 10% of his stock. He became then the stockholder of the company. Liza was a shareholder also; she has 15% of stock. Li Tin Century had the reputation. It made Lik worried. Chun came back, and continued his job as Liza’s driver Liza went shopping with David, and met Philip. He greeted them and apologized Liza for having accused her wrongly about Howard’s death. He met Tona and he told him the true. Liza said that she didn’t mind and she asked about Tona’s health… Liza also asked him if he wished to work Li Tin Century. Philip accepted with pleasure. [glow=red,2,300] Episode 15[/glow] Coming back home, Liza and David were surprise to see the presence of Helen. Seeing her parents, she said: “Hey mom. Let’s see! Where do want to go for the holidays?” Liza: “I don’t plan to take holidays.” Helen: “You should! I have place for you to choose: ‘South East of Asia, Europe Occidental, and North of America,’ where then?” Liza: “No where.” Helen: “As you don’t plan to celebrate the marriage again; you should at least take the honeymoon.” David: “who told you that we won’t?” Liza to David: “Who told you that I will marry you again?” Then she went straight to her room. Helen told him to follow her. David followed her then. Liza, changing her clothes, David, approaching her and said: “Please don’t do that to me!” Liza smiled while turning her back to him. He approached her more, and hugged her from the back. Kissing her neck, he said: “I won’t let you go.” (hehe). Liza, smiling: “How old are you? You still look like kid… (trying to go) ok, let me change clothes.” David: “I help you.” (aiiii, naughty) Liza prevented him to take off her clothes and told him to go out to wait for her taking dinner. He refused and took out the ring that he bought. He kneed down then and proposed her to marry him again. Liza turned her back to him again: “How I know that you really correct yourself?” David, standing up: “I swear…” Liza interrupted him by turning to him: “who told you to stand up?” David kneed down again. Liza: “You have to prove me first…” David: “ok. Follow me!” He stood up and went out. Helen was hearing them at the door. David went straight to the door. Helen looked at her mother. And Liza wondered what he wanted to do neither. David left the house. Liza, Helen and domestics followed him. Leaving the portal, David stood on the sidewalk and observed what surrounded him. Liza and Helen arrived. Helen: “Dad! What are you doing?” Seeing a car, David rushed to the middle of the street, standing on the way of the car and yelled: “I love Fong Kim Ping!!!” Liza and Helen were scared. The driver braked all at once and stopped the car at just about 2 cm from him. The driver left his head from the window of the car and said: “Are you crazy? !!” David, scared, with trembling voice: “I love Fong Kim Ping.” The driver insulted him again and continued his way by preventing David. Liza and Helen joined him and asked him if he was crazy. David took Liza’s hands and said that he was ready to sacrifice for her… He took out the ring again and proposed her to marry him again. Helen told her to accept… Liza looked at him a while and agreed. David, being happy, hugged, carried her… A car honked, and David did hand’s sign to show his excuse. And they went in the house.
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Post by SOLY on Jan 23, 2005 9:42:26 GMT 6
Episode 16
Keung had a business trip in China; he met coincidently Tin Ning at the airport who wanted to go back to Taipei. Keung was happy because he thought that she was died already. Keung suggested her to go back to HK with him. Tin Ning didn’t want. She was scared of Chi Lik. Keung promised her to protect her… She finally accepted. Helen and David were viewing the house’s catalog. Liza wondered why David wanted to buy a new house. David said that he didn’t want to stay in Liza’s house for all his life. Now he had the mean to buy a nicer house for the family. He wanted to be the one who supplied the family, not Liza… Helen supported him. Then the ring sounded. The domestic went to open the door. It was Keung and Tin Ning. Liza was surprise to see Tin Ning. Keung wanted to confide her to Liza while waiting for him to go to Taiwan together. He said that his house is not suitable to shelter one more person. Liza’s house is good to protect her from Lik’s eyes. Liza accepted. Helen invited her to stay with her in her room. She accepted. Helen and Tin Ning didn’t know each other well. Since Tin Ning left her house unforeseenly, she didn’t have many clothes. Helen gave her some of hers. Morrow, Liza and David went to the auction mart. They met Lik there. Liza and David made Lik to buy a non-important land with a very expensive price. And they finally could buy a lot with reasonable price because Lik didn’t have enough money in investment. Outside, David laughed at Lik and told to not try to compete with them… Then they got in the lift all together. Then a girl came, and told them to wait for her. Making a place for the girl, Lik had to move to stand next to David. The girl was standing before them, and there are some others in that lift also. At the moment, that the door of the lift going to be open, Lik touched the girl on her back. The girl wondered who touched her. She turned back and saw David smiling. Getting mad, she slapped him all at once. David and Liza were astonished. Liza looked at her husband wildly. David looked at Liza and the girl. The girl (to Liza): “Told your husband to not do that dirty thing in the lift.” Liza looked at him and got mad. Lik laughed at him and said that human behavior can’t be corrected easily. David pointed him with his finger and said: “you!!!” but nothing else getting out from his mouth. Liza was very angry. In the house, he tried to explain to Liza that it was not his fault. It was probably Lik’s trick… David said that if he wanted to do that, he didn’t need to do in front of Liza. So Liza got madder and said: “so, if I was not there you would do?” David: “No!! I don’t mean that…”
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Post by SOLY on Jan 28, 2005 9:54:26 GMT 6
Episode 17
David had to sleep in the living room. Liza would know that it wasn’t David’s fault. But she was still mad because she couldn’t accept to be scolded disgracefully. Liza had a pity for him, and she took a blanket and covered him and she went in her room. David half awaked, saw the blanket, knew that it was from Liza. He smiled then…<br>One day, Tin Ning was knitting in her room. Helen came and asked her to go shopping with her. Ning didn’t want to go. She scared to be seen by Lik. Helen insisted many time and she accepted finally. Leaving the house, they met Liza, and they wanted her to go with them also. After shopping, they went in a teahouse in a mall for taking a break. Lik, walking outside with a client, saw them. He was surprise to see Tin Ning, but he couldn’t leave his client. Flora went to the toilette. Coming back, she didn’t see Liza and Tin Ning. She called then her mother, but no one reply. She was scared. She called again, but this time, the home was closed. Helen called her father, but he was away. Tin was that was a call from Helen. He picked up to tell her that David was away with a client, she should forget his hand phone… Helen told him that Liza and Tin Ning were not found, and her mother didn’t pick up her phone. She was scared that they were caught by Chi Lik. Tin dropped a message to his secretary for David and Keung and went to help Helen to find them. They asked people around, but no one paid attention on them. Tin called Lik then to release Liza and Tin Ning, but Lik was talking to a client and said that he didn’t know, and pretended to not know that Tin Ning was alive. After talking to Lik, David and Keung arrived and asked if they could find them. Helen blamed herself. She should force Tin Ning to come out… Keung scolded her more. But Tin defended her and said that they would observe Lik. Helen and David kept calling Liza, but the phone was not in work. Lik’s car left Ming Ta’s building. Tin, accompanied by Helen, Keung and David, followed him
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Feb 10, 2005 14:14:18 GMT 6
Post by Wilairat on Feb 10, 2005 14:14:18 GMT 6
Hi...Soly, I just finished reading your ATE lol he,he It's very interesting especially when Liza jie has scences with David he,he I like when Liza was nearly fall but David could help her and stay so close ha... I feel it's so sweetly he,he I'll wait for you to continue if you have free time lol. Btw,thanks for good serie ;D
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Feb 10, 2005 14:34:30 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Feb 10, 2005 14:34:30 GMT 6
Glad that you like it, lol. I have 1 more episode to post. but I need to restart the computer first. I was saving a lot of clip. there is something wrong now. I can't manage it well. Wait
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Feb 10, 2005 14:38:19 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Feb 10, 2005 14:38:19 GMT 6
Episode 18
Lik went to buy a bunch of flowers. Keung wondered if he bought for Tin Ning. Tin didn’t dare to approach Lik’s car. They followed him from a far. Lik went to many places and made the gentle group have the headache. Then Tin noticed that his car had a problem. He couldn’t move forward. David and Keung saw Lik going away from them. They went left the car and got in a taxi, and asked the driver to follow Lik’s car. Following till a hill, the driver received a call from his relative. He refused then to continue. He said that his wife was going to give birth to a baby… Keung begged him, but he didn’t care. He dropped them on their way without demanding them to pay. They called Tin to tell him where they were. But Tin didn’t finish repairing his car yet. They had then to walk. As it was dark, it’s a bit difficult to follow the trace of the car. They used the light of the moon and the light of their hand phone to continue their way. Lik arrived at a house in wood. Someone opened the door of the house for him. Liza and Tin Ning were in that house. Their hands were attached with a cord. And their mouths were closed with scotch tape. Lik asked the man why he did to Tin Ning like that. Then the man went to untie the cord of Tin Ning, and take off the scotch from her mouth, and hauled her to Lik. Tin Ning begged him to release Liza, but he didn’t want. He approached Liza and talked to her: “You could escape from dead last time. You were lucky. I wonder who can help you now.” He laughed, and went out with Tin Ning and the guy. Ting Ning cried and begged him to release Liza again and again. She could do anything he wished… Lik didn’t listen to her, and ordered a guy to burn the house. Tin Ning tried to prevent the guy to burn the house, but Lik caught her tightly. Liza tried to escape, but she couldn’t. Then Keung and David arrived, and saw Tin Ning fighting with Lik. David was scared to see the flame escaping from the house. He wondered if Liza was in. Keung and David went then to help Tin Ning. Tin Ning told them to help Liza.
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Feb 10, 2005 20:22:50 GMT 6
Post by Wilairat on Feb 10, 2005 20:22:50 GMT 6
Soly,I'm here again ha...just take a break for doing report lol but luckily can read your new episode,Oh! it's so exciting ha....I think finally David can help Liza lol but wanna read your story line he,he I'll wait you again
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Post by *~J~* on Mar 18, 2006 8:26:11 GMT 6
lol Soly... it's already been a year and you've not completed your fan-fiction!! can you please complete it?? happy ending pls... hahaha
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Mar 18, 2006 21:52:52 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Mar 18, 2006 21:52:52 GMT 6
lol Soly... it's already been a year and you've not completed your fan-fiction!! can you please complete it?? happy ending pls... hahaha ohh yeah, ok, later, ok. i am very busy lately i even forget the story. need to re-read it
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Apr 16, 2006 22:55:34 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Apr 16, 2006 22:55:34 GMT 6
Episode 19
David tried to get in the house, but was stopped by the smugglers. Lik wanted to shoot Keung, but Tin Ning, bit his hand then ran away. Lik who wanted to shoot Keung, accidentally shoot Tin Ning. Both, Lik and Keung terrified. Keung, hugging Tin Ning, called her. Lik dropped his gun and ran to them. He pushed Keung away and took Tin Ning in his arms, and brought her to the hospital. Seeing his chef like this, the evils perturbed, and David profited of this occasion to get in the house and help Liza. David was very scared to see Liza surrounded by the fire, and it was much risked for him to approach her. Liza, weaken, saw David very fuzzy. Although it’s dangerous, David tried his best to approach her and saved her from the fire (wow brave hero, haha). And Liza faint in his arms. Keung who was worried Tin Ning, seeing David carrying Liza out, went to their relief. David was also injured (Hey can u guys see David as a hero? I can’t see it la.) At that time, all the evils followed Lik. And Tin arrived and brought them to the hospital.
In the hospital: David’s injured wasn’t serious, so he just needed a bandaging. He went to join Helen and Tin in front of the room that the doctor’s curing Liza. They were impatient to know about Liza’s situation. In the other hand, Keung was worried about Tin Ning, he went to see her, but Lik prevented him to see her. Keung came back then to see Liza. At the same time, the doctor came out, and David asked him about Liza’s situation. The doctor said that Liza had escaped from the danger, and she’s still very weak, she needed to take the rest. They could visit her just for a short while.
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Apr 17, 2006 18:30:36 GMT 6
Post by *~J~* on Apr 17, 2006 18:30:36 GMT 6
ohhhh.... Lisa Fang is in the hospital..... so, David will be near her bedside taking care of her, saying nice things to her.. haha... S!! i have an idea, let David say something nice to Lisa just before she wakes up, and Lisa finally wakes up, but Lisa pretends to be sleeping / in a coma, and she smiles.
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Apr 17, 2006 19:02:59 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Apr 17, 2006 19:02:59 GMT 6
haha, okok
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