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Post by SOLY on Nov 18, 2004 7:29:35 GMT 6
ATE 2.5
Cast Liza Wang Ming Chun as Lisa Fong Kim Ping Kwok Fung as David Fok Chi Leung Gallen Lo Ka Leung as Yip Win Tin Flora Chan Wei Chan as Helen Fok Kenix Kwok as Kho Mei Na Louis Ko Tin Lok as Cheung Chi Lik Roger Kwok Chun On as Ma Chi Keung Ada Choi as Tin Ning Sek Sau as Chun: Lisa’s driver Sao: Mei Na’s father (dun no his real name) ….
Reminding the Story After Howard’s funeral, Lisa left the Yip family and install in her own house. David (her ex-husband) came often to visit her and took care of her when she got sick… But Lisa almost accepted David’s passion, but she discovered later that he was too evil; he used the illegal trick to weaken Tin… She refused then his love again. David thought that it’s because of Howard Yip, because Tin’s Howard’s nephew. He decided then to take revenge on Ming Ta Company…<br>…… Following the death of Tin’s sister, David was sought after by the police. He caught onto Chi Lik’s betrayal. He realized that he was conned by Chi Lik. Chi Lik took the control of his company. But he didn’t dare to denounce Ah Lik’s fraud to the police because he didn’t want to be sent to the jail. … David was hidden nearby Lisa’s house and observed her from a far. After seeing her car entering in the house, David was caught by Ah Lik’s uncle.
Episode 1 Lik’s uncle brought David to a forest; David was scared to see Chi Lik. He realized that Lik was going to kill him. He wanted then to escape, but Chi Lik knocked his head with a shovel all at once. David felt then on the ground. On another hand, Liza was started. She felt bad, and sad, she didn’t what happened. Sao, Mei Na’s father, observing them from a far, was scared and let escaping a sound. Lik told his subordinate to follow the noise but they didn’t find anything. Lik told them then to bury David, but as they were hurried, they didn’t do appropriately. In fact, Sao was still around. He saw then David’s hand moving. He approached him. He heisted. He didn’t want to help him, he decided to leave him there, but he finally helped him. Sao brought him to his friend’s house. His friend knew a bit about medicine and they can trust him. Lisa was taking tea in her house. Then the ring sounded. Tin arrive and had a conversation with Lisa. He told her that he saw David, and said that the most important person who was responsible for his sister’s death was Lik… But Tin still blame him for this fact. Lisa was very worried about David. He was cleaver but he still had been tricked…<br>Sao called Mei Na. He needed money… Mei Na went to meet him, and Tin followed her. Seeing Sao, Tin rushed to catch him, but he ran away. Tin followed him, and Mai Na was scared but she couldn’t follow them. Tin caught Sao, and wanted to bring him to the police to denounce Fok Chi Leung. Sao refused to go to the police station. He brought him then to see David. Tin was surprise to see David, injured, and lying on the bed. Sao told him that it was Chi Lik who did that.
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Nov 18, 2004 21:22:55 GMT 6
Post by Wilairat on Nov 18, 2004 21:22:55 GMT 6
Soly,well still not read anything yet,but just see topic and know that you'll start new serie again I feel wow!!! so great ha...but be an honor still not have free time coz will have midterm exam soon so after read this serie,I'll give you the response ;D Btw,Thanks again "Good writer"
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Post by SOLY on Nov 19, 2004 8:25:14 GMT 6
Did u see at least, it's At The Threshold Of An Era?? lol lol, I wanna change the half story of ATE2 lol. Kwok Fung is not died, lol anyway Episode 2 Short time after, David awoke. He had headache. He looked at Tin and Sao, and asked who they were. Tin and Sao were surprise. How couldn’t he recognize them? Sao asked then the doctor. He said that David’s head was knocked with a steely thing, so he might lose his memory. Tin wanted to bring him to the police, but Sao said that he didn’t even know who he was, how can the police charge him for trial? Tin asked Sao to denounce him, but he didn’t want to go to the jail. They better healed him first, and then he could denounce Chi Lik… Tin told Lisa about David. Lisa wanted to see him. Entering in the house, seeing David’s situation, Lisa was heartsick. She approached him and tried to talk to him. But he moved back and was scared of her. Liza to Tin: “Why that.” Tin: “head was knocked with a steely thing, he lost his memory.” Lisa wanted to take David to care in the hospital public. She thought the judge won’t sentence a sick person… His sentence might be shortened…<br>Arriving in the hospital, many journalists rushed to Liza. Tin and Chun prevented them to approach her. In the hospital, the police interrogate Liza and Tin about David. They said that they didn’t know what happened to him. When they found out about him, he was like that already. So they couldn’t help the police… David was taken well in care, but he was always observed by the police. David was scared; he didn’t know why the police wanted to charge him, lol. Liza relieved him and promised him to help him. She will hire a good lawyer to defend his lawsuit… As the police didn’t have enough evidence to accuse David for the kidnapping, and as he lost memory, he was finally judged innocent. Lik was in the law court also. He was mad to see David fine. He didn’t want him to find back his memory. He even wanted to eliminate him, lol.
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Post by dinhkm on Nov 19, 2004 9:57:29 GMT 6
Wow, soly... David didnt die. he had just lost his mind and he would recognize liza soon right,... liza might forgive him huh
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Nov 19, 2004 11:35:50 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Nov 19, 2004 11:35:50 GMT 6
yup, lol
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Nov 19, 2004 11:41:49 GMT 6
Post by *~J~* on Nov 19, 2004 11:41:49 GMT 6
I like the story so far.... hehe...... are you going to pair up David and Lisa? ?
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Nov 19, 2004 11:47:09 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Nov 19, 2004 11:47:09 GMT 6
he, he, can't tell you now. U will read
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Post by SOLY on Nov 26, 2004 8:23:18 GMT 6
Episode 3
Liza allowed David to stay in her house, lol. David admired Liza to have such nice house. David liked his room. Liza told Tin that she preferred to see David like that. Lived in peace… Tin also forgave him. Liza told him that she talked with Helen by phone. She was planning to come back to see her father, but she was not free recently. But sure she would come soon. Tin smiled…<br>In the living room, David saw the photo of Liza and Helen. He approached it, and smiled while seeing Liza’s photo, then he looked at Helen and wondered who she is. Liza came and said: “She is our daughter. Her name is Helen.” David looking at Liza: “um, we already have an as tall daughter? She looks nice. Why is she not with us?” Liza: “lol, yup, we are not as young as before. Our daughter is a lady already. She is lawyer. She decided to work in England.” David: “Hope our family can be reunited soon.” Liza changed her mood. Just then David saw Liza and Howard’s photo. Liza: “He is my husband…” David: “Err…” Liza: “… but he’s died already.” David: “I am sorry. But…” Liza: “It’s right, I used to be your wife, but we have divorced. And please, don’t ask me for the cause of our divorce. Let you to remember by yourself.” David: “I see.” He became sad suddenly. Liza: “ok, it’s dinner’s time…” Lik was still wondering who helped David. He was afraid that David would find back his memory. He told his uncle then to hire a killer to kill him. Chung was driving around the town. Liza showed David the important site on their way. Liza didn’t wish David remembering his past. He should start his life from 0. Later, arriving home, Liza didn’t see David. The domestic said that he went to have a work hoping he could remember something. Liza scared he would be lost. She went out then to find him. Getting on the sidewalk, Liza saw David in the other side. David saw her also. He did a sign to show that he is going to cross the street. Crossing by the pedestrian way, a car ran very fast in intention to crash him. Liza yelled: “attention!” Seeing the car, David, bewildered and stayed immobile
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Dec 24, 2004 21:36:42 GMT 6
Post by *~J~* on Dec 24, 2004 21:36:42 GMT 6
stop writing already? ?? now i crave for ate.... but don't like david......
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Dec 25, 2004 15:46:15 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Dec 25, 2004 15:46:15 GMT 6
no, but I dun have time to continue
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Dec 26, 2004 13:17:15 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Dec 26, 2004 13:17:15 GMT 6
Episode 4 David was bewildered and stayed immobile. Suddenly, Chun arrived and pushed him away. Missing David, the driver left the place quickly. Liza approached them, and asked David if he was ok. At house, Liza helped David to cure his non-serious injure, and thanks Chun for helping him. Chun said that it’s which he must do. David told her that when he saw the car rushing toward him, he was scared, and he reminded something. Something like someone knocked his head… He didn’t see it clearly. Liza: “Do you remember who hit you?” David pressing his head: “eeee, I don’t know… I have a headache…” Liza let him then tranquil. Tin came to visit Liza and David, and learned about David’s accident. Liza said that it’s bad that she couldn’t see how the driver looked like, and his car didn’t have number badge (umm dun no what we call that, plz correct me). Tin did think that it might be intertwined with Chi Lik…<br>Sao, Mei Na’s father, was still sought-after by the police for Mei Na’s. Tin, as he could already forgive David, he forgave also Sao. His principle enemy was from that time Lik. But as his father and brother were waiting trial for the financing affair, Tin needed the evidence from Lik to reveal his father’s innocence. And as Lik still wanted Sao also, he needed to trade Sao, low-spirited against the proof. Sao was attacked by Lik’s subordinates. He was dieing, and asked Tin to trade him with the evidence. Tin was finally going to the trade, but they were seen by Mei Na, who couldn’t forgive him afterward. … A party was coming, In Lik’s house: Chi Lik forced Tin Ning to go to a party with him. Tin Ning didn’t want to go but she didn’t have choice. She had to listen to him. Liza prepared herself for going to that party also. Liza dressed up elegantly. She was pretty and chic. It made David wonder-struck. Liza wore the neck glass that David gave her when his company went into the stock market (once again, dun no if the word is correct) and gave her again during the Christmas day. Seeing that necklace, David remembered a bit. He remembered that he was the one who gave it to her.
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Dec 26, 2004 14:06:04 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Dec 26, 2004 14:06:04 GMT 6
Episode 5
David looked at the necklace and asked Liza: “it was given by me, right?” Liza, surprise: “ya… you remember?” David: “I just remember that I gave you when my company went into the stock market, and I don’t know why it was in auction, and I bought it back…” Liza: “do you remember more?” David: “Umm, I looked rich, at that time… And, I remember that you wore it and danced with me. We seemed to be happy that day.” Liza didn’t know what to say. Then Chun reminded her that it’s time to go. Liza said then goodbye to him. In the party, Lik and the other shareholders of Ming Ta had a conversation with some officials. Tin Ning was around also. Lik wanted to open a casino… Liza arrived and seemed to have good connection with those officials. Lik changed then his mood into a bad one. After the leaving of those officials, Liza said that she was ready to prevent Lik’s plan… Lik looked at her wildly and gone, following by the other shareholders and Tin Ning. But Tin Ning was stopped by Liza. Liza told her that she shouldn’t choose the way that she used to choose… Lik saw Liza talking to Tin Ning, and wondered what they were saying about. After then, Tin Ning told Lik that she didn’t feel well, she wanted to go home first. Lik agreed. Tin Ning went to the sea, and swam…<br>At home, Lik’s uncle said that Liza was troublesome and asked Lik if he wanted him to eliminate her. Lik said no for the moment, because Liza had known a lot of ministers… Plus she was just a woman…<br>In the morning, Lik learned the disappearance of Tin Ning in the sea. He rushed to the place and asked them to find her. Once, he realized that Tin Ning couldn’t be found, he was very upset, and mad again Liza. He thought that it should be probably cause of her that Tin Ning chose to die. He called his uncle then to make Liza disappeared. He didn’t want to see her again. Chi Keung (Roger Kwok), learning about Tin Ning’s disappearance, was also upset and went to the sea, hopping to see her. Tin prevented him to be as crazy and tried to console him. Keung cried.
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Dec 31, 2004 14:06:45 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Dec 31, 2004 14:06:45 GMT 6
Episode 6
David wanted to work, and Liza tried to find him a job in Tin’s company (Li Tin Century). Tin accepted. He occupied then the administrative place. Liza left then Li Tin Century with Tin’s accompaniment. Leaving Tin about 5 mins, Tin received a call, saying that Miss Fong was in danger… Tin precipitated to take a taxi and follow Liza’s car. He gave her a call asking if she was alright and where she was. (hehe, kind of ATE2, lol) Liza said that she was ok and she was in around some place..., but just 1 second later, a group of people with knives, sticks…, stopped her car. Chun braked all at once and Liza yelled. Chun tried to escape, but those brigands followed their car, then they reached to hit the car, car’s window and tried to kill Liza. They reached to injure her, but Chun took his body to protect her from the knives and the sticks… He finally received a strike of baton on his head. Luckily, Tin arrived with the police. The bandits escaped. Chun was taken to the hospital. His injure was serious. Liza was injured also, but not serious. She was very worried about Chun. David arrived at the hospital with urgent. He was very worried about her. Liza told her that to not worry as much. Her injure was not serious. In the house, David took Liza as a cripple; he prevented her to do all things in the house. Liza said that she just has a skin’s problem, “Let me take dinner by myself.” David smiled. Then, the ring sounded. The maid went to open the door. And Helen was at the door. Liza was happy to see her daughter. Helen hugged her mother, and happy to see her father looking at her. David: “You must be my daughter?” Helen: “ya Daddy.” She hugged her dad also, and continued: “Ok, I will help you to remember back.”<br>Later, in the night, Helen and David were looking at the old photos, and Liza was smiling behind them. Liza visited Chun in the hospital. She cooked a soup by herself for him. Chun felt happy and constrained at the same time.
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Post by SOLY on Jan 3, 2005 14:37:19 GMT 6
Episode 7 Helen and David went to visit Chun also, and they met Liza there. Helen and David thanked Chun for helping Liza… Helen had an appointment with her new boss; she had to go as soon as possible. So Liza had to bring David to home. David said that he whished to be injured, so Liza would take care on him, and he could eat her soup… Liza said that he did like kid…: “Don’t tell me that you are getting jealous? If you want I will cook for you also.” Both smiled. Helen wanted to prepare something for Christmas. David didn’t want a big party. The family celebration was enough for him. Liza to David: “umm, this side, it looks like a bit Fok Chi Leung that I have known....” David: “I am away Ho Chi Leung but this Ho Chi Leung is not the same one as the one you have known before.” Liza, surprise : “you know how you were before?” David, , noticing that I said something wrong: “errr, as I lose my knowledge and memory now, I think I should be different from before.” Helen approaching her dad: “Ya, (hugging her dad’s arm, and addressed her mom) don’t you think he looks more adorable now?” David smiled and caressed his daughter’s head. Liza smiled also. Chun could leave the hospital; Liza went then to take him. Chun was constrained to oblige Liza to come to take him from the hospital. She brought him to his house and allowed him to take holiday. In the morning of Christmas Eve, while taking breakfast, Helen fixed an appointment with her parents for the dinner. Liza and David were waiting for Helen for the dinner, but she didn’t come. She called her father that she couldn’t come, and told him to not waste that nice occasion, he, he (roguish Helen). David told Liza that Helen was busy, she can’t come. Liza understood that Helen wanted to give chance to them. They took dinner happily. David cut the Yule log for her. He was helpful, and asked her if she wanted more piece of Yule log… The music was soft and the ambiance was nice. David invited her to dance. Liza accepted. They smiled while dancing. David praised her to be pretty that day. He also asked her why she didn’t wear the necklace that he gave her. Liza: “You still remember about that? Umm, I keep it for the party. If you want I will wear next time.” Both smiled and continued dancing happily. ;D
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Post by SOLY on Jan 3, 2005 15:28:22 GMT 6
Episode 8 Helen had party with Sandy’s house with other friends. Sandy invited Tin also. She was surprise to see Tin there. They had good time together also. Helen, coming back home happily, and surprise to see her father sitting alone in the living-room. Helen approaching her father: “what are you doing here? Where is mom?” David: “In her bedroom.” Helen, disappointed, sat near her father: “I suppose you spoiled your chance again!!!” David smiled: “No, I don’t think so. We had nice time together.” Helen excited: “really??? Hey, relate me!!!” David: “Um, nothing special, but I think I still have chance. I won’t let this chance gone again. Lose her once, it’s a lesson learn. Don’t worry; I will do my best to take her heart back. And our family can be reunited like before.” Helen: “Yup (started), umm, you remember back???” David: “lol, I don’t want to lie you. In fact I found back my memory for a while already, but I scared that your mother won’t take care on me anymore.” Helen: “you are not afraid that she will realize that?” David: “I trust you girl.” They laughed. Staying behind them, Liza was very mad while hearing that. She entered in her bedroom, and closed the door strongly. Helen and David:-X were scared the worst. David knocked the door, and tried to call her, hoping he could explain his raison. But Liza ignored him … Morning, getting out from her bedroom, Liza saw David near the door. She prevented to see him, but David woke up suddenly. He tried to talk to her and he finally can say something. He scared that when Liza knew that he found back his memory, she would ignore him, and wouldn’t care him as she did at that time… Actually, he didn’t care about money, prestige anymore, what he wanted now was to stay with her. … Liza was also touched, but she didn’t want to forgive him. Helen tried to reconcile her parents, but not success. Liza didn’t talk to him to the day of December 26th, 2004. She saw from the tv news about the Asian Tsunami which reached Indonesia, Sri Lanka, India, Thailand…<br>She suddenly remembered that Chun was taken his holiday in Andaman and Nicobar Islands (India) . She was worried, but as he didn’t give her the contact, she can’t contact him, just hoped he would contact her.
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Post by *~J~* on Jan 3, 2005 16:14:58 GMT 6
cool. Tsunami is included.
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Post by SOLY on Jan 4, 2005 16:32:20 GMT 6
Episode 9 Morrow, Liza and the others learned more about the disaster of those country and the other ones and the misery of the population survived. She was running then to the donation, and planned to go aiding those miserable people in their county. Seeing the number of deaths increase constantly in the 12 countries surrounding Indian Ocean which hit by the deadly Tsunami, Liza decided to go to India. Helen and David didn’t want her to go. They said that if she wanted to help them, she just give them the money, the place can still be in danger. Liza said that she has decided; so no one can change her decision. (Umm, Liza Fong works for an association, right? Dun no which kind of association. I suppose…) Liza decided to go to India (Cenai (Madras), Andaman and Nicobar Islands especially ) with HK contribution (money), medicine, ect… with the other first aids workers (I dun no if it can be happen, I am not the specialist in those things, so plz correct me) Her major objective is not to try to find Chun, but to help the miserable Indians who were injured or starved… She helped who (world health organization) to take care on the injured people, helped aids to distribute the needs, and to help people to find their relative… (Umm hard job) She tried to find Chun in Andaman Island, but didn’t see. Suddenly, the alarm of the danger reverberated. People frightened, and tried to escape to the safe place and headed to the hill… Liza helped an old woman to straighten. While raising her head, Liza saw David. Smiling, he approached her and took her hand and ran together. Arriving in the safe place, they sat quietly; Liza was scared, but stayed quiet. David pressed her shoulder and looked at her. Liza turned toward him and laid herself down on David’s should. She dropped tears and didn’t know what would happen to them. Later, they realize that it was a wrong alert. The tsunami was not going to come back. They took back their activities.
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Jan 13, 2005 12:51:13 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Jan 13, 2005 12:51:13 GMT 6
I am bored writting that, dun no if u r bored reading that Episode 10 Liza wondered why David was present there. Davis said that he would follow her to where she goes… He wouldn’t let her go far from him… Liza smiled. David helped people to do the cleaning on the beach and to find the victims… The hundred dead bodies were orderly and really to be burned. Liza wearing mask, looked at the corpses burning, and dropped tears. David arrived, taking her shoulder for consoling her and sign. Then the digger came with some other dead bodies, and laid them beside in order to identify. One of them spoke English with a Chinese accent. Liza recognized Chun’s voice. Liza: “Chun?” Chun took off his mask. Liza took off her mask also: “I am Liza.” Chun: “Madam? ... Mr Fok.” During the break, Liza, David and Chun were talking about their adventure on the beach. The earth quaked a bit. David helped Liza to find her equilibrium. Seeing Liza and David, too close, Chun was deceived. Since first earthquake, it used to be the non-serious earthquake in the Andaman and Nicobar’s islands because they are enough close to the epicentre. As India refuses International Aids, the discontentment of the victims of the tsunami developed. Liza understood that those people needed these, but as she is just a stranger, she couldn’t do anything. We thought that as the government refused Aids, he should have the means to resolve this problem… Some days after, the situation seemed to be improved… Liza and David decided to leave that place. Chun decided to stay there for some time more. In HK, in Liza’s house, Helen was happy to see her parents back. Liza wanted to foster some orphans of the Tsunami. David and Helen agreed. Liza took back her activities from morrow. Liza went to revoke (sale out) her share from Ming Ta. Lik accepted but he was mad. He still thought that she was the cause of the death of Tin Ning. He thought that Liza was lucky to be able to escape from death. The Tsunami had a negative effect on the Asian’s stock market. As Lik had to contribute for the season catastrophe, he had to eliminate his Casino’s project. So Liza and Tin don’t need to tire to destroy his plan.
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Jan 16, 2005 10:43:23 GMT 6
Post by SOLY on Jan 16, 2005 10:43:23 GMT 6
Episode 11 In Liza’s house, David and Helen Helen suggested her father to get back together. David explained that he is now poor. He didn’t dare to run after her. He wanted to get what he loose back legally. But it would be difficult. Helen told him that Liza wouldn’t mind he was rich or poor. He just would show her his loyalty and his love… Helen went to the church, and met Tin. Tin told her about Mei Na. And he brought her to see Mei Na secretly in an old age pension. Helen comforted him while saying that Mei Na will understand him…<br>Liza’s house Liza’s domestic took holiday. So David tried to cook. Helen didn’t come to take dinner. Liza arrived and headed to the kitchen. And see David. Liza: “what are you doing?” David: “Cooking, but don’t know if it’s eatable or not.” Liza looked at what he did, and said: “umm, let it there. We go to the restaurant.” ‘David: “No, don’t spend much and plus it’s not good for our health.” Then David gave her his first salary. He said that he didn’t want to stay in her house without doing something or without paying anything… Liza refused and she cooked. After taking dinner, David helped her to do the dishes. Liza wanted to take a bottle of wine and she loose her equilibrium, and going to fell. Luckily, David was nearby, he rushed to take Liza’s waist and prevented her to fall. Liza fell on David’s bosom, and for finding her equilibrium, Liza had to hold David’s shoulders. They were in the position face to face:-[. They looked at each other. David approached to :-*kiss her:-[. Liza stayed immobile a while then moved back, and go to her room. Lying on her bed, Liza looked at Howard’s picture and she thinks. On the other side, David looked at Liza’s picture and thinks also . Later both got out and met each other. Liza looked shy and said: “I come to find the water.” David: “me too.” Then each one took a glass of water and got in their room.
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Jan 17, 2005 16:49:25 GMT 6
Post by *~J~* on Jan 17, 2005 16:49:25 GMT 6
Hey, i really like this ATE fan fiction!!!!!!!!!! hehe, especially the xmas part and tsunami, where Lisa Fong is so kind-hearted.............. hahaha..... then, the part, with Lisa Fong and David erm, getting close to each other.......... i like the part also where Lisa Fong is thinking and David also thinking........ ahahahaha...... more more, i want more, don't let ATE stop Soly~!
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