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Post by ^K^ on Feb 15, 2004 18:42:08 GMT 6
thanx Soly!hehe...Shan wasnt angry with Ming 4 very long was he?!?!lol...but then again y would he??she's the best! this episode seems shorter than the others...is that intentional??lol
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Post by *~J~* on Feb 16, 2004 9:59:18 GMT 6
Thanks Soly. Maybe after my test, I can write about A Awakening Story 2!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait or even Yesterday's Glitter 2
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Post by SOLY on Feb 16, 2004 13:52:41 GMT 6
Ohh yea, Jamie. I am waiting to read ur drama. He, he, Kalei, I dun have time to write more, so post only that. Now, beside university, I need to train to play Flute also, I have to play My Heart Will Go On, in less than 2 weeks. Ohh, I am scared 4 that.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 16, 2004 15:52:24 GMT 6
oh Soly,dont worry...i think u will b fine!!u go play ur heart out!lol! and u take ur time with the rest of this story!no rush
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Post by wendysys on Feb 17, 2004 11:55:14 GMT 6
Thanks, Soly. I enjoy reading this story. Please continue when you have time to write. Hehe, I wouldn't mind if Liza ends up with Damian at the end. ;D You know, like Wilairat and Jamie, I prefer to read the parts that talk about Ming.
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Post by Wilairat on Feb 17, 2004 14:02:42 GMT 6
He,he I think this episode has more love scences than other episodes lo But I like them he,he I'll follow your story ;D Good writer he,he
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Post by SOLY on Feb 17, 2004 16:36:14 GMT 6
Very happy, that u like my story. I think I will make Liza ending up with Danny, coz, they have done a lot of things together, ha, ha, lol ;D I will continuous later. I will do a comedy also, but need to find the logic even first, lol
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 17, 2004 17:17:49 GMT 6
hehe...they have done a lot of things 2gether...lol...i like how u add in the "ha ha,lol" Soly!lol
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Post by SOLY on Feb 17, 2004 17:44:54 GMT 6
Hey dun understand what u mean. I added what? The story? A lot of things I mean, like their love is too deep, so no one can't separate them, ha, ha. I am not sure, if Ming have some problem with Shan, Ming will love Chung Yan as much as she loved Shan.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 17, 2004 17:49:45 GMT 6
lol...ok...basically i just meant i foun it funny wen u said "I think I will make Liza ending up with Danny, coz, they have done a lot of things together, ha, ha, lol"...nothin 2 get worried about...lol
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Post by sunny on Feb 20, 2004 19:54:51 GMT 6
Wow..so cool:) Thankyou Solyda
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Post by SOLY on Feb 21, 2004 13:03:50 GMT 6
U r welcome. ;D Where were u Sunny? I miss u
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Post by SOLY on Feb 22, 2004 14:49:24 GMT 6
[glow=red,2,300]Episode 7[/glow]
Shan goes to his office for the first time. Chung Yan gives him a place as a finance manager. Others staffs welcome him. Ming and Shan invite Chung Yan and his daughter (Yee) for the dinner in their house. Lily waits for her godfather with impatience. Chung Yan and Yee come, Lily, happy, runs to welcome Chung Yan. Lily: “godfather!” Chung Yan: “ohm my dear Lily” and he carries her. Chung Yan: “Ohh, too heavy, um, you have grown up my dear. Do you know what I have for you?” Then he gives her a puzzle. Lily: “Thank you. You know? I miss you, when you bring me to the amusement park again?” Chung Yan: “if you get 100 points for school’s exam, I will bring you.” Lily: “ok, promise?” Ming and Shan look at them, and laugh. But Shan is a bit jealous to see his daughter enjoying with Chung Yan. Yee, seeing Michael preparing the table, nears him and asks him how she can help him. Yee seems to be interesting in Michael (lol). After the dinner, Michael helps Lily to assemble the puzzle. Yee comes to bothers. She says that she doesn’t understand integral in Math, she needs the explication. So he demonstrates her, but she doesn’t listen to him. She regards him, and smile. Ming is glad that Yee forgives him, and the family is unit. Lily can’t find a piece of the puzzle, and want Chung Yan to help her. Shan wants to help her, but she doesn’t want she wants Chung Yan, lol. Shan feels rejected by his daughter. Few hours later, Shan is lying on his bed; Ming gets out from the bathroom. Shan is in the bad mud. Ming goes on the bed, and asks him why he does that head. He tells him that he is jealous because Lily seems to like Yan most than him. Liza laughs. Shan wonders why she laughs. Ming: “Lily is just a little girl; Yan took good care on her as his own daughter during these last years when you are not here. It’s normal, that she treat him better than you.” Shan: “Yeaaa, he should want to take my place forever.” Liza looks at him: “what are you talking about?” Shan, displeased: “not thing, just I shouldn’t accept to work for his company. I dun need his help.” Then he sulks, turns his back to Ming, and sleeps. Liza wants to talk to him more, but as she sees him ignoring her, so she gets angry also. Morrow, Ming goes to her office as usual. The customs-officers have an important operation again. During the operation, Moon is nearly killed by a smuggler, but she is helped by Lawrence, then bullet goes through his shoulder. Moon, panicky, doesn’t know what to do. Then this smuggler is arrested by Joe. Ming calls the ambulance. In the hospital, Ming, Moon and Joe are in the front of ICU’s room. Yu Li, Chung Yan, Yee come. Yan asks Liza what’s happen. Moon says that it’s cause of her. If he didn’t help her, the one who should be in the ICU’s room is her, not him. Yu Li gets angry, moves to place just next to the door. She was worried about Lawrence. Then the doctor gets out, and asks who the Lawrence’s relative is. Yan says that he is his brother.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 22, 2004 18:43:10 GMT 6
thanx Soly...ooooo Shan is jealous!hahaha
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Post by SOLY on Feb 23, 2004 13:32:33 GMT 6
U r wellcome. U know I really dun no what to write,
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Post by *~J~* on Feb 23, 2004 18:09:27 GMT 6
Yea!!!! shan is jealous!!!!!!! ooh!
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 23, 2004 19:52:17 GMT 6
haha...yep...hope he gets jealouse of Damien more!lol!! aww Soly, wish i could help u write this but im rubbish wen it comes 2 writin stories!haha...erm...if i think of nethin i will let u know!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 24, 2004 15:51:12 GMT 6
Ok, thanks
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Post by SOLY on Feb 28, 2004 15:05:55 GMT 6
[glow=red,2,300]Episode 8[/glow]
The doctor tells him that luckily, the bullet didn’t go to the important part of his brother’s body, so he is ok now, but as the patient lost a lot of blood, so he needs a while for awaking. Everybody is happy. Yu Li stay with him. Moon looks at him from the door. She cares on him. Getting out, Ming notices that the tires of her car are burst by someone. Yan comes and asks her if she need help. Then he proposes to bring her to the house. Reaching her house, Ming leaves the car and thanks Yan. Suddenly, 2 smugglers arrive, and start to attack her. Yan sees that, goes to help her, but he is injured. Luckily, they reach to subdue that smuggler, and then they run away. Ming sees Yan’s injure. She wants to bring him to the hospital, but Yan refuses, he says that it’s not serious, just put the medicine on, it’ll ok. So Liza tells to get on her house for taking care on his injure. He accepts. Ming looks for the medicine, and then she tells him to take off his shirt for her disinfecting his injure. While disinfecting his injure, Yan looks at Ah Jie, and smiles, (lol). After nursing him, Ming gives him Shan’s shirt to put on, because his shirt is dirtied by blood. Ming is arranging her medicine’s in the kitchen. When Yan is putting the shirt in, Shan arrives, and is amazed. Then, Ming gets out from the kitchen. Without seeing Shan, she asks Yan, if the shirt watches him. Then Shan gets really mad. He tightens his hands. Ming sees Shan, and asks him with a surprise, “You are back”. Without saying anything, Shan nears Yan, and hits him. Ming arrests him: “Are you crazy? Why do you behave like that? Stop” Shan still hits Yan. Yan hurts his injure. Liza: “Stop! Do you know what are you doing?” Then she pushes him, and Shan fells. Afterward, she helps Yan to straighten and get out. Ming is sorry. Yan says that it’s ok. He understands that Shan is getting jealous. So he is sorry for making Shan jealous. Ming says that it’s not Yan’s fault. It’s Shan’s. He loses the reason. Getting in, Ming sees Shan on the sofa. She goes straight to the bedroom, but she is stopped by Shan. Shan wants her to explain about Yan (he, he). Ming doesn’t want to say anything. She reproaches him to do not trust her. She is very angry with him. She enters in her room while slamming the door. Shan follows her. Ming is thinking about the afternoon attack. She wonders who those 2 smugglers are. While seeing her ignoring him, he goes straight to the bathroom. Then he sees a shirt with some stain of blood in the clothes’ basket. Then he looks at the trashes’ basket, and sees the cotton ect… He knows that he was wrong to accuse Ming and Yan. He gets out from the bathroom, and tells Ming that he saw a shirt… He asks her if it belong Yan. Ming doesn’t reply. He wonders what’s happen to them. Ming still keeps dark, and goes straight to the bathroom. Shan arrests her. He is sorry, and begs her to forgive him.
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Post by *~J~* on Feb 28, 2004 20:34:25 GMT 6
Ooh. There seems to be some conflict between Shan and Ming. Hehe.... Soly, u have a naughty naughty mind! Hahaha......... Anyway, it's a nice story
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