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Post by SOLY on Feb 5, 2004 10:10:27 GMT 6
Cast: Liza Wang Ming Chuen as Lui Fok Ming/Madame Danny Lee Sau Yin as Tao Ling Shan Lawrence Ng as Lau Ka Man Jessica Hester Hsuan as Vung Moon Fun Yu Li as Yu Li Damien Lau as Lau Chung Yan William Cho as Lam Chi Kit Joyce Tang as Wan Pui Ling Wong Ka Lok as Michael: Liza’s godson Michael Tong as Joe Wong Hei as Lam Chi Kwong Jacqueline Lee as Lau Yee: Damien’s daughter Chun Pui as Kon Tin Yea: Jackie’s father Joe Ma as Kon Man Long: Jackie’s brother: Mak Cheung Ching as Lee Zhi Seks Jade Leung as Bao Gei Heurng Jenny Shing as Lily: Ming and Shan’s daughter Ming’s mother in law: Yuen Kwong’s mother
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Post by SOLY on Feb 5, 2004 13:38:39 GMT 6
Story
Kwong is in the coma, after his colleague saving him from the sea. Shan is condemned for 4 years in the jail. Ming gives birth to a daughter, who becomes then goddaughter of her good friend, Chun Yan. Heurng becomes a housewife. Kwong awakes 1 year later.
Custom’s members: Lui Fok Ming, Lau Ka Man, Vung Moon Fun, Wan Pui Ling, Joe, Lee Zhi Seks
Episode 1
Moon is looking for Kwong in the sea. A ship of Customs, leaded by Madame Lui comes and helps her. Then they find Kwong faint, can’t move. In the hospital, everybody is waiting for Kwong’s result in front of ICU’s room. The doctor gets out, and asks who Kwong’s relative is. His mother says that she is his mother. Kit, Moon, Ming, are around too. Kwong is in the coma, we don’t know when he awakes. Everybody is disappointed, and goes to see him, and tries to awake him, but she is stopped by Kid. His mother weeps. Ming looks sad. Back home, she is thinking of Shan’s lawsuit in Netherlands, and looks at her stomach (baby). Then her mother in law comes. At the door, she says that she has a surprise for Ming. Ta, ra tan…, he, he, Michael (Ming’s godson). Yuen meets Michael outside. He has an attention to continuous his study in Hong Kong. Ming is happy to see him. And he says he is happy to will have a younger sibling. In Holland, as he confessed by himself, and proved a good behavior during those recent years, Shan is condemned for 4 years in the jail for involuntary homicide. After learning that, Ming happy, and waiting for him. Moon goes to the Mall with Ming and Heurng. In the parking station, Moon sees a space, Ming adjusts the car, and then another car goes in. Liza stops the car. Moon and Heurng, get off, and Moon agues the man, he (Lau Ka Man) gets out and says that, if they saw it why didn’t enter fast. And he goes. Heurng stops her. Moon gets angry, then Ming calls them to go on, and they go to find the other space. Heurng is looking at Baby’s clothes, and she finds some for the one of Ming also. But Ming doesn’t know if it’s a boy or a girl yet, he, he. Moon still talks about Ka Man. Getting from the baby’s store, Ming sees her old good friend, Lau Chun Yan, businessman. They didn’t see each other long time ago. He wonders for whom she buys the baby’s clothes. Heurng answers that they are for her son and Ming’s future baby. Chun Yan is surprise, and congratulates her. Damien is waiting for another one, his brother, Lau Ka Man (Laurence). Then Laurence comes, Ming, Heurng, and Moon, amazed. And Moon: “You?” Damien asks “you know each other also?” Laurence answers “we have a little misunderstanding” Ming, “yes, it’s just a little misunderstanding. It’s ok.” Damien and Lawrence have to go, and say bye. Heurng asks Liza about Damien. Yan was Liza’s classmate in High School (lol)
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Post by SOLY on Feb 6, 2004 15:10:42 GMT 6
Episode 2
Morrow, at the office, a new costume has just been transferred to Liza’s customs department, (he, he) it’s Laurence. He takes the place of Kwong. Moon is not happy to have Laurence as boss. Moon often goes to see Kwong in the hospital, and sees his mother and Kit. Kit and Joyce are waiting for Kwong’s awakening for getting married. Ming is looking for books that give good advice to take care a baby in a bookstore. Damien is there also. He comes behind her and asks if she needs to be a good mother. Liza surprised, and turns, “ah, it’s you? What are you doing here?” Damien “I am looking for some good romance. Can you advice me?” Then they have lunch together. Damien asks about her husband. Liza tells him about Shan. Damien wishes Liza’s family will be reunited soon. Liza smile “thanks you”. Damien requests her to be her child’s godfather. Liza agrees. After that, Damien comes often to visit Liza and her relative. At Ming’s customs department, Liza receives a call, that there is drug traffic (He, he). Liza orders her subordinates to execute the operation. Lawrence and Moon are in the same car and observe the situation. Joyce and Joe observe the smugglers. The smugglers execute their acts. Joyce tells Moon, Moon tells Lawrence. Lawrence orders “go”. Joe and Joyce stop the defrauders, and say “Custom”. The smugglers frightened, throw, what they have in the hand to Joe and Joyce and run away. Joyce can catch one of them. But that other 1 is followed by Moon and Lawrence. Moon falls and twists her ankle. Then he is captured by Lawrence. The operation is successful; Ming complements her subordinates. Moon hurts her ankle, Ming tells her to take the rest. Lawrence gives her a flask of medicated oil for taking care on her ankle. Moon thanks him. Few months later, as she is aged, Ming needs to be operated for delivering the baby. Everybody is waiting with impatience. Then, a doctor gets out, and says that the mother and baby are ok. She gives birth to a daughter. Ming’s mother in Law (Yuen), Michael, Chung Yan, Heurng and Secks are happy. Chung Yan asks the doctor if they can go to see them. Yes, but Ming is still not awake. So they shouldn’t disturb her much. Then, Moon and her family come, and ask how Ming is. Yuen answers that Ming and her daughter are ok. Afterwards, they go to see the baby in the glass cylinder (I am not what we call that). Chung Yan seems adore his god daughter. Hereafter, Liza awakes, and sees everybody smiling. Yuen requests her to give her daughter a name. Liza says that she will ask Shan first, a melancholic smile is appeared from Chung Yan (he, he). Michael is happy to have a younger sister. Heurg and Seks want Liza’s daughter to be their son girlfriend. Then a nurse comes, and tells them that the patience needs to take the rest, everybody leaves the room, except Yuen, who wants to take care of her daughter in Law. Ming wants Yeun to write a letter to Shan for telling him about her and her daughter.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 6, 2004 15:47:10 GMT 6
i love how this story is prgressin!keep up the good work and i cant wait 2 read more of this!! SO happy that my fave actors/actresses r in this story!Damien,Joe Michael!hehe...and of course the original cast...Liza and Jess! ;D
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Post by SOLY on Feb 7, 2004 9:53:57 GMT 6
i love how this story is prgressin!keep up the good work and i cant wait 2 read more of this!! SO happy that my fave actors/actresses r in this story!Damien,Joe Michael!hehe...and of course the original cast...Liza and Jess! ;D Glad that u like it. ;D
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Post by SOLY on Feb 7, 2004 9:59:47 GMT 6
Episode 3
In Netherlands, learning the news from Ming, Shan is so happy, and ready to write one for Ming too. He relates her about his situation in the jail, and he gives a name to their daughter “Lily”<br>Moon visits Kwong as usual. She tells him about Ming. She adds that Lili is adorable and she wishes him to awake soon to see her. (lol) While getting out from the room, she sees Lawrence who comes to visit a friend also. Then, they work together. Moon tells him about Kwong. While listen to Moon, Lawrence feels desolation for her, and hope he awakes soon. Lily is 2 months; Ming and Yuen enjoy playing with her. Afterward, Michael is back from university. He sees Ming and Yuen playing with Lily; he wants to carry Lily too. The family looks happy. Chung Yan accompanies Ming to buy Lily’s clothes. While working he sees his daughter, Yee, who is supposed to study in England. Yee is with a boy (David), who seems to be a vandal. Chung Yan is surprise to see Yee, and says, “Yee! What are you doing her?” Yee ignore to see her mother. David asks her if she knows him. She replies that she doesn’t know him and they go. Chung Yan continuous to call her, and follows her, but he is interrupt by the passengers that are quite many on the way. Afterward Yee and David disappear. Liza approaches him and asks “what up?”<br>In the restaurant, Yan explain “Yee is my daughter. Ever since her mother’s died, she doesn’t want to talk with me and goes to abroad (England). She thinks that I cause the death of her mother.” Before, Chung Yan only cared on his deal. So his wife needed to go to the gambling house, and has gambling debt. Chung ever paid the debt for her and alerted her to do not go to the gamble. One day, it’s happen again, he wanted to punish her, but he didn’t know that the situation was as serious. And she was killed by those illegal creditors. Yan felt sorry for this even, and his daughter can’t forgive him. She talks solely with her uncle, Lawrence. Liza feels distressing for him, and places her hand on his shoulder. He places his on hers and smile with some tears in his eyes. (lol) Liza helps Yan to find Yee’s lodging. Lawrence is looking for her also. He prepares her photo in the newspaper. Moon, Joe, Joyce come to see it also. Liza comes and surprised to see her subordinate in disorder. Seeing Liza, each goes to his post and pretends working. Liza goes in. Moon’s apartment: finding the key before her house, Moon hears a couple arguing next to her ear. She turns to the house in front of hers, and amazed…
End of the 3rd episode…<br>
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 7, 2004 17:41:23 GMT 6
thank u so much 4 the 3rd chapter Soly! only 1 mistake tho...u said in line 10 that Yee ignores her mother, but i think u meant father rite since Lau Chung Yan is a guy
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Post by SOLY on Feb 8, 2004 15:00:47 GMT 6
[glow=green,2,300]Episode 4[/glow] Moon turns and recognizes Yee. Yee chases David. David goes and Yee enters in her house. And then Moon calls Lawrence. Lawrence comes and asks Moon where is Yee. Moon shows her house. Lawrence rings the ring. Yee, in the house thinks that it’s David. Opening the door, she says “what do you want more?” Then sees her uncle, she wants to close the door, but Lawrence pushes it and enters with her. Moon enters also. Lawrence wants her to go back home and continuous her study. Yee refuses. Moon helps him to talk with her too, but she rejects Moon, and says that she doesn’t know her … Lawrence tells Yee that her father comes soon. She refuses to see him. If her father comes she won’t talks to Lawrence anymore. Then Yan and Liza come, he, he. Yee rejects them, and throws the pillows, and all things that she can find to them. (lol) then she weeps. Moon’s parents and brother get out and ask what happen. Moon’s mother surprised to see Ming there “Ah Ming, you are here too?” Ming smile. Moon moves back her parents and brother to the house, and says that it’s not their affair, and then enters in the house. Lawrence tells Yan and Ming to go also. Yee accepts to stay with her uncle. Lawrence brings Yee to his house, and sees Yu Li. Lawrence lives with his girlfriend, Yu Li. She works as a lawyer. Yu Li prepares a bedroom for Yee. In another room, Yu Li asks Lawrence about Yee. Lawrence tells her that she stays there for a moment. Yu Li says that she doesn’t mind about how long Yee will stay there. Lawrence thanks her and smile. Then prepare a school for her. Moon is seeing Kwong and talking to him. Then she notices that Kwong’s finger moves. So she calls the nurse. Kwong awakes and sees his mother, Kit, Moon, Joyce, Ming, Heurg and Secks. He has a problem for moving his limb. Kit helps him to straighten. Everybody is happy to see him awaked, especially Moon. Kwong looks at Moon, and the others understanding the situation, get out. Kwong thanks Moon. He says that he heard all what she said, and if there was not her to encourage him everyday, he wouldn’t awake, Moon smiles. At Kon Tin Yea’s company (Kon’s company), Man Long enters in his father’s office, and tells him about Kwong’s awakening. Tin Yea, get angry, and to eliminate him. Leaving school, Yee sees David who is waiting for her. He wants money. She says that she doesn’t have. So he picks on her, and then picks her purse. Yan sees that, and goes to help her. He pushes David, and then they scuffle. David bit Yan, and Yan falls on the ground. Yee calls help, and David goes (lol). Yee helps her father to straighten, and asks him if he is ok. Yan is happy and smiles.
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Post by SOLY on Feb 8, 2004 15:04:05 GMT 6
[glow=Yellow,2,300] Episode 5[/glow] Kwong can go back home. His mother, Kit and Moon bring him back. Arriving in front of his house, a biker shoots him, but Kit sees it and pushes him. No one is injured. The biker drives away, Kit takes his car and follows him. He tells the others ICAC to arrest him also. Then that biker is killed by road accident. Kwong knows who wants to kill him. He is scared about his family’s security, so he decides to goes always and drops a letter to his mother. “Don’t worry about me; I go where I need to go… take care…” Moon lost Kwong again. 2 years and 6 months later, Michael is congratulated from college. He is looking for a job. Yuen (Ming’s mother in law) travels in the world (lol) Lily is playing in a park next to her house with her mother (Ming) and her godfather (Yan). Lily runs, Liza follows her. Then, uppp, Lily knocks someone. This one says “You should be careful!” Liza straightens herself, and stays immobile. She is happy and surprised to see Shan. Ming nears him; some teardrop is delivering from her eyes and smiles. He asks her if she is Lily. Ming nods in approval. Ming tells Lily to call him Daddy. Lily: “Dady”. Both laugh. After looking at them with hopeless, Yan nears them and introduce himself to Shan. Ming is sorry, coz, she completely forgot him. Yan: “it’s ok. I don’t want to bother you. So goodbye, see you.” He goes. Ming and Shan looks at each other and smile. Shan carries Lily and they enter in the house. In the house, Lily is playing with Michael, Liza, cooking and Danny helps her. Liza asks him why he comes back before the anticipated date. He says that as his behavior was well in the jail, they released him before the anticipated date. (he, he) Shan hugs Ming’s waist from her back, and says that he misses her. (ha, ha, plz dun be rot!) Ming wants him to release her because she doesn’t want her children see her like that. (he, he) Few hours later, Lily is sleeping in her bed and Michael in his. Ming and Shan are sitting in the living room. They are neck and neck (lol). Shan says that he misses her. He carved the number of the day on the wall everyday. He wanted that the day goes forward faster. Ming missed him also. They look at each other, and ready to … (he, he). Just when Shan’s lip touches the one of Ming (ha, ha) Lily cries. They stop their action, and Shan: “ohh no” Then they go to see her. Lily used to sleep with her mother and when she doesn’t see Ming, she is scared. Finally, Lily sleeps in the middle of her parent until the Sun-up.
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 8, 2004 17:49:44 GMT 6
awww Soly,thanx 4 episode 4 and 5! very very good!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 9, 2004 16:36:38 GMT 6
awww Soly,thanx 4 episode 4 and 5! very very good! [glow=yallow,2,300] Thank u, thank u[/glow], Glad that u like it. I will continuous the story when I have time. He, he, u know now I am back to school
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Post by ^K^ on Feb 9, 2004 16:50:53 GMT 6
ur welcome!im lovin it so far...not 2 b mean..this story seems better than ATE 3...hehe...but i still like ATE 3! ok i will wait 4 the rest of the story!
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Post by Wilairat on Feb 12, 2004 15:59:18 GMT 6
Oh! Soly, I like Episode 5 so much ha.. But coz I enjoy your story so much so,why interrupt by Lily's cry ha... Well,from your story,I like it so much.You're very create but the real is,I still confuse about actors & Actresses in this story coz I recognize just Liza jie,Danny,Damien,Jessica,Wong Hei,Liza jie's mother. At the beginning if I don't know that whose charactor is,I always look for their name again in your introduce but later I'm too lazy to looking for them ha.. so some scences that didn't have Liza jie,I skip it ha.. But at first,I'm amazed that this story has Damien again ha.. but it's o.k. to take he to take care Liza jie.But he falls in love with Liza jie a bit,right? so you should give more time for him before Shan come back ha... But I happy that Shan come back now ;D And waiting for next Episode,plz don't thinking too long coz I want to read it ;D he,he and plz,have a lot of scences of Liza jie too. Actually I can read the story that have only about Liza jie ha.. ;D coz although you have other actors or actresses but if that scences don't have Liza jie sometimes I skip them lol ha...
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Post by Wilairat on Feb 12, 2004 16:02:41 GMT 6
Oh! I've forgot to tell you.Shan should hug Liza jie at the first time they met too he,he
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Post by mun on Feb 13, 2004 7:00:10 GMT 6
Soly, Thanks for the story! ;D Keep up the good work!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 13, 2004 14:54:15 GMT 6
Oh! I've forgot to tell you.Shan should hug Liza jie at the first time they met too he,he I didn't make them huging each other, coz, Ming was surprised, happy, so she can't do anything, can just say immobile and there r Damien and Lily also, he, he ;D
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Post by SOLY on Feb 13, 2004 15:11:03 GMT 6
I will continous, but dun find the story yet. Now I find other story. Like Animal's protectors, but not sure about the tittle yet. U know like, some ecologists are scared about the extinct animals, so they want to protect them. So they creat a machine which can go faster than light's speed, and can go to the past. U can see Liza in 20000 years ago. Umm but now I am worried about my dog, Ziego. Dun no who stole him.
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Post by *~J~* on Feb 15, 2004 12:16:11 GMT 6
I like this story, yea, i just skip the part that don't have Liza or Ming......... haha........ sorry......... Anyway, I see conflict coming in between Liza and Shan. Are Damian and Liza going to be together? Ooooh! HAHAHA................. Keep up the good work. Just don't make sad ending!!!!!!!!!
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Post by SOLY on Feb 15, 2004 13:31:53 GMT 6
He, he, Liza and Damien won't get together, he, he ;D
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Post by SOLY on Feb 15, 2004 13:35:17 GMT 6
[glow=red,2,300]Episode 6[/glow]
Morning, Ming prepares the table for breakfast. Shan looks at her and smiles. Then Michael comes, and enjoys seeing delicious food on the table. Shan is looking for a job. But as he is aged, and used to be sent to the jail, it’s difficult for him to find the job. So Ming tries to help him discreetly. Shan brings Ming to her office. Before getting out from the car, Ming gives Shan a kiss on his lip, (ha, ha). Shan: “Have a good day, honey” (Beeerk, too sweet) Ming: “bye”. Turning, she sees her subordinates who are looking at them, but they pretend to do not see anything. Ming reddened. Joe, Pui Ling, Moon, talk to each other in intention to tease Ming and Shan, then they enter. Shan bring Lily to kindergarten. Then go to find the job, but no one wants him. Shan is eating noodle for lunch, watching tv, reading news for finding the job, however Liza is executing an dangerous operation. Night, Shan looks at Lily sleeping, then goes to sit in the living room, it is 10 pm, Ming does not come yet. Shan thinks that he is useless, his wife works her supporting the family, but he can’t do anything. Then Ming comes, he smile at her. Ming doesn’t take dinner yet. So, Shan cooks noodle for her. Ming nears him, and says that looks delicious. Shan replies that he can do only that, and now he becomes a househusband (he, he). Ming hugs him from his back, and says, “If they don’t want you to work for them, it is his lost. Don’t dropout easily! It’s not your instinct.” Shan: “ok, backed, wanna taste?” Ming: “No”. Then she kisses him (ha, ha), (um, how can I write it?) Morrow, Shan goes to find a job, as usual, and he is accepted. He is happy. And he discovers later that the owner is Chung Yan. He thinks that it’s thanks to his wife that he can find the job. Back home, he is not happy, he is sitting in the living room. Ming comes and asks him how about the day. He replies “you know well, why you pretend to do not know?” Ming surprised on what he says. Shan ads: “Chung Yan didn’t tell you?” Ming, seemed tired, moves to sit next to him, and place her head on his shoulder, “Tell what? I really dun know”. Shan believes his wife, and says: “I am hired in Chung Yan’s company.” Ming: “Good.” “No good, if he didn’t know you, he wouldn’t accept me. Ok, I will renounce my job tomorrow.” Ming, leaving his shoulder, says: “What? Now, how old are you? And you even have been in the jail. You don’t want me to support and finance all the family’s charge, I hope? Shan is sorry, and promise to work hard for the success, and he hugs her, both smiles. (He, he)
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