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Post by SOLY on Jul 29, 2006 22:21:04 GMT 6
Hey guess who's the murderer!!
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Post by *~J~* on Jul 30, 2006 16:11:19 GMT 6
i have something to add... like what makes you so sure that the piece of glass from the glasstable? maybe someone broke a cup or plate or something that's made from glass.
and the part where Kevin slips... ya, what's the point of that? you should have made him discover something on the ceiling while he's on his butt. like a spot of blood or something. haha....
as for who's the murderer............ i'm not gonna make any random guesses yet. need more conclusive evidence. haha... everyone's innocent until he/she is proven guilty. LoL....... i should be a lawyer! haha.......
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Post by SOLY on Aug 1, 2006 23:31:18 GMT 6
Episode 5
Liza started to scold Gong. She blamed him for helping Ray go to the state police school and for hiding it from her for all this time. Ray’s supposing to be studying Law. Gong had nothing to say, so he just stayed quiet and listened to her telling him off The others in the office were surprised to see Liza acting in such a way. Later, in the canteen, people talked about Gong being scolded by Liza and just as Gong appeared, they all stopped talking. While getting the food, Gong saw Liza having lunch on her own. He approached her and asked if he could take a seat. Liza said coldly that that chair and table didn’t belong to her (hehe). Firstly Gong apologized to Liza about the whole Ray thing. He recognized his wrong but he wanted Liza to understand why he did that. He knew he was wrong to hide it from her but he promised Ray that he wouldn’t let her know before he graduated. He understood what Ray wanted to do. And if Sau Yin (Danny was still there he would be pleased to see his son follow in his footsteps. Being a police officer isn't that bad. He warranted Liza for his security and Ray will be under his supervision. Liza looked at him and said "being a mother of someone, I just want what’s best for him. I don't even know what my son's been doing. All this time I thought he was studying law but he's been training as a police officer!" Gong looked at her and posed his hand on hers to comfort her. He comforted Liza that Ray will be under his control and he guaranteed his safety.
Later, when Liza got home, Rebecca said loudly: “Sister! You are back? How is your day?” Ray’s in the kitchen making tea for Liza. Liza: “I am tired, going to go have a bath first.” Rebecca: “Wait!!” Then Ray appeared from the Kitchen with a cup of tea. Rebecca led Liza to the sofa and told her to sit. Liza looked really serious. Ray gave her the tea as a sign of apology. He knew hiding the truth from his mother was wrong and he said that if she didn’t want him to be a police officer he would leave it. He didn’t want his mother to be mad at him.” (hihi) Liza: “Don’t be stupid! You have been training for years and have come this far, why give up now?” Ray and Rebecca looked at each other and wondered. Ray: “What do you mean?” Liza: “Promise me to be a good policeman!” Ray looked at his aunt who’s also smiling and said: “Of course, I will.” And he rushed to hug his mother and thanked her. Liza: “that’s not all. You have to promise me that you will be careful and don’t do anything dangerous or stupid to make me worry about you” Ray, crossing his mother’s finger: “Promise, Mom.” Rebecca ran to hug her and said: “Sister! You are the best mother. I want to hug you too.” Lucky barked and approached them. He wanted to join them too. (haha)
Few days later, outside the police station, Tavia helped an old lady to cross the street. Arriving to the other side of the sidewalk, the lady thanked her. Tavia told her to be careful and she needed to get in the office right now. The lady dropped a coin and Tavia helped her to pick it up. Suddenly, Ray arrived on his motorbike and was close to knocking her down, however ray braked just at the right time. Tavia scolded him and asked if he was blind! Ray: “I am sorry. Are you ok?” Seeing she’s fine, so he added: “As you are fine, I need to go. I am in a hurry.” Then he went in the office. Tavia: “Wai??? What sort of behaviour do you call this? Just you in a hurry and I am not?!!?
End E5
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Post by *~J~* on Aug 2, 2006 14:52:53 GMT 6
Lucky's so cute. ok i spot some errors... but am not free to correct them for u. i'll find time... anyway, Tavia and Ray... what a great couple! haha
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Post by SOLY on Aug 2, 2006 16:20:04 GMT 6
Haha, lucky! just an imagination, u can also find him cute, haha.
Anyway, don't also forget the Pin In of Brave Chinese Citizen or Ging Wah Chun Mound. The Italy vs Germany is finished for months. haha, don't forget u promised me last Saturday, hehe
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Post by ^K^ on Aug 2, 2006 17:08:41 GMT 6
well...here goes with the corrections
She blamed him to have helped Ray to go to the state police school and hid her all along - she blamed him for helping Ray go to the state police school and for hiding it from her for all this time
Ray’s supposing to studying Law - Ray's supposed to be studying Law
Gong couldn’t find anything out to say back. He could just stay quiet and listen to her telling off - Gong had nothing to say so he just stayed quiet and listened to her telling him off
The others in the office were surprise to see this look of Liza. - were surprised to see Liza acting in such a way
Later, in the canteen, people talked about the fact that Gong being scolded by Liza. Then Gong arrived. They stopped then talking. - people talked about Gong being scolded by Liza and just as Gong appeared, they all stopped talking.
While getting the food, Gong saw Liza taking lunch alone - gong saw liza having lunch on her own
He approached her and asked if he could take a seat beside. - dont need the word "beside"
Firstly Gong apologized Liza for the story - what story? - Gong apologised to Liza about the whole Ray thing
He recognized his wrong but he wanted Liza to understand why he did that. He promised him to not let her know before him getting graduated. - he knew he was wrong to hide it from her but he promised Ray that he wouldnt let her know before he graduated
And if Sau Yin (Danny) was there, he would be pleased to see his son following his way - if sau yin was still here he would be pleased to see his son follow in his footsteps
It’s nothing bad to be a police - being a police officer isn't that bad
He warranted Liza for his security and Ray will be under his supervision - i didnt understand this line
“Being a mother of someone, I am defeatism. I don’t even know what my son is doing. He’s been training as police for many years while I am thinking he’s doing Laws. I don’t care about what he wants… I am defeated, am not I?” - defeatism and defeated?not making sense and wrong use of words i think. maybe it should have sounded like this "being a mother of someone, i just want whats best for him. i don't even know what my son's been doing. all this time i thought he was studying law but he's been training as a police officer!" - I don’t care about what he wants… I am defeated, am not I?- i still dont understand this part
Ray’s in the kitchen to prepare the tea for Liza. - ray was in the kitchen making tea for liza
Liza: “I am tired. Need to take bath first.” - i am tired. going to go have a bath first
Rebecca led Liza then to sit on the sofa - rebecca led liza to the sofa and told her to sit
Ray brought the tea to apologize her - ray gave her the tea as a sign of apology
He recognized his wrong. He shouldn’t hide his mother to go for training. He said if Liza didn’t like him to be a police, he left it. He didn’t want his mother to ignore him. - he knew hiding the truth from his mother was wrong and he said that if she didnt want him to be a police officer he would leave it. he didnt want his mother to be mad at him
Liza: “It’s stupid. You have been training for years, what’s the point to give up now?” - dont be stupid! you have been training for years and have come this far, why give up now?
Liza: “It’s not all. Promise me to be careful on your action! Don’t do the dangerous act to make me worried.” - thats not all. you have to promise me that u'll be careful and dont do anything dangerous or stupid to make me worry about u
in front of the police station - outside the police station
The lady dropped down a coin. Tavia helped her to pick it back. - the lady dropped a coin and tavia helped her to pick it up
Ray’s motorbike arrived at the point of knocking her slightly. Ray rushed to be on time at the office. Luckily he braked at the right time. Tavia blamed him to have eyes’ problem. - ray arrived on his motorbike and was close to knocking her down, however ray braked just at the right time. Tavia scolded him and asked if he was blind!
what is this kind of behavior? You are in a hurry, I am not hurried? - what sort of behaviour do u call this?just u in a hurry and im not?!!?
um...looks a lot doesnt it?sorry! still...the murder case isnt solved yet...hmmm...how many more chapters before that case closes?haha
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Post by SOLY on Aug 2, 2006 18:30:23 GMT 6
ya, that's a lot lol, I don't know how many eps left. Don't even know when Danny will appear. It really depends on the wordpage, lol
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Post by *~J~* on Aug 2, 2006 19:12:32 GMT 6
yea....... haha. u should wrap it up and move on to another case....
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Post by ^K^ on Aug 2, 2006 19:12:40 GMT 6
well...forget about Danny for now...i think the main thing u need to do is end the murder case...haha...5 chapters already and still not solved...haha
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Post by SOLY on Aug 2, 2006 19:21:54 GMT 6
thanks for the correction. Correted but for this And if Sau Yin (Danny) was there, he would be pleased to see his son following his way - if sau yin was still here he would be pleased to see his son follow in his footsteps
---I keeped "there"
He warranted Liza for his security and Ray will be under his supervision - i didnt understand this line
---He comforted Liza that Ray will be under his control and he guaranteed his safety
hehe, don't know if it's correct
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Post by ^K^ on Aug 2, 2006 22:13:40 GMT 6
if u use "there" where is "there"?
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Post by SOLY on Aug 2, 2006 22:14:32 GMT 6
The case will end when the story ends. Haha, scaring u right?? hehe, kidding, I will rush to finish this case.
I thought since E3, u could have an idea of who's the murderer, lol.
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Post by ^K^ on Aug 2, 2006 23:44:10 GMT 6
ha...i was gonna say it was the maid who murdered the guy...but really...theres no clear idea as to who it was.if its the wife then too obvious...
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Post by SOLY on Aug 3, 2006 11:22:00 GMT 6
haha, you will see. Hey do u think that the eps is too short? Want a 2 in one? Then now we are up to the bgning of the 3rd eps, lol.
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Post by *~J~* on Aug 3, 2006 14:27:16 GMT 6
2 in one, meaning 2 cases in one episode or what...
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Post by *~J~* on Aug 3, 2006 14:29:37 GMT 6
err... pls don't scare us!
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Post by SOLY on Aug 3, 2006 17:00:47 GMT 6
2 eps in 1 eps., hehe
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Post by *~J~* on Aug 4, 2006 18:31:03 GMT 6
what do u mean?
you're gonna have longer episodes from now on?
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Post by daisy on Aug 5, 2006 10:55:04 GMT 6
Gong was so poor when Liza scolded him. As though the character become complicated , but I except the later esipode.
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Post by SOLY on Aug 5, 2006 15:16:18 GMT 6
Hehe, Gong = Mr Chen = Sek, lol
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